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Halloween collaborative Forums story (1 paragraph per person)

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  • Candy0_o
    Candy0_o Member Posts: 1,012 ✭✭✭✭
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    Can me do it too?

  • UnovanZorua
    UnovanZorua Member Posts: 3,118 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    @MonstaDash @Candy0_o

    Anyone who hasn't written can write next. I think @MonstaDash is next since they asked first.

    Whenever the story naturally reaches its end? I didn't really think about that too much since I had no way of predicting how many people would participate. Maybe I should've made a planning discussion first.

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 2,104 ✭✭✭✭
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    No I think it's fine!

    I was just curious on if there was a plan.

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 2,104 ✭✭✭✭
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    Commenting to put this in recents

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 2,104 ✭✭✭✭
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    Commenting to put this in recents

    I want to make sure people can see it and join

  • MonstaDash
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  • MonstaDash
    MonstaDash Member Posts: 795 ✭✭✭
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    As we get closer and closer to the noise we notice a dark fog but push through. We approach the woman and see her paralyzed in fear, in front of her is a demonic looking Pokémon that almost resembles a Banette but more distorted. The Banette moves closer to her with malicious intent, that is my cue to take action. “Hey, leave her alone!” I say and send Gardevoir out to fight her. I command Gardevior to use Shadow Ball but the Banette dodges and knocks out Gardevoir without any effort. “Gardevior, return!” That Banette didn’t even flinch with Gardevoir, it beat it in an instant. In the fog I see a man walk out, “Weak as always, eh Trainer?” the man said “Your Pokémon had the type disadvantage, why didn’t you just change it out? Oh wait because you are a bad trainer that’s why!” The man in the shadows showed himself, he was the Gym Leader I had lost to! “I am not a weak trainer, this is all an illusion!” I yelled. “The only illusion is you thinking you are a good trainer, but deep down you know you are just a punk who has only been winning by cheap tactics and luck!” the man kept on laughing away. I didn’t know what to do, I couldn’t even help the woman… The woman! I ran to her to see if she was fine, she was fear struck but responded. “What’s the matter, hitting too close to home?” said the man, except his voice change. I looked back and I saw myself, laughing at me “Don’t like what you see, a weak trainer who can only win by catching some fabled unbeatable Pokémon!” he laughed, laughed so hard that it could be heard from miles away. He couldn’t be right, I want to be a strong Trainer but I am not weak… or am I? "The only reason you even have four badges is because of a few cheap shots, deep inside you knew you had no chance against those Gym Leaders! That's why you lost against the Fifth Gym leader, you couldn't get a cheap shot as always!" he said as he continues to laugh. I don’t know what to do anymore, I collapse to my knees as his laughter continues, not sure if I can even continue on. Maybe I should just give up, he is right… As I start shutting down I hear a noise beyond the fog, it almost sounds like it said “...musharna…”.

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 2,104 ✭✭✭✭
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    I love some good illusions!

    Very fun!

    I liked it!

  • UnovanZorua
    UnovanZorua Member Posts: 3,118 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    @Candy0_o

    You're next.

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 2,104 ✭✭✭✭
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    The tension is killing me!

    What happens @Candy0_o?

    WHAT HAPPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEENS!?!?!?

    (I'm just excited. I'm not rushing you. Take your time!)