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Halloween collaborative Forums story (1 paragraph per person)

UnovanZorua
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edited October 30 in Pokémon Square #1

I sat in the Pokémon Center staring at the unremarkable slate walls, waiting for the nurse to heal up my team after yet another embarrassing defeat at the hands of a Gym Trainer, when I heard two people whispering something about a near undefeatable Ghost type hiding in the neighbouring woods at night. Sounds like a surefire way to win my next battle. Just as I was about to go ask them to tell me more about it, the nurse exclaimed "Your Pokémon are all healed up!" and gave me back my Poké Balls. I thanked the nurse. And when I looked back to see where those two were to ask them questions, all I could see was the usual quiet of the town, and all I could hear was the chilling cold of the Autumn winds.

I really need a thicker jacket.

(Add any notes in brackets at the end or before the start of the paragraph. Anything not said here is up to you to write, don't worry about if the main character is out of character or wrong at all because you're supposed to add to and change their character. The only "right things" are the things already mentioned. Take the story in any direction you want, humourous or spooky.)
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  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 2,036 ✭✭✭✭
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    Do I make a different post or in these comments?

    I'm next, by the way

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 2,036 ✭✭✭✭
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    Cool!

    Give me a bit!

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 2,036 ✭✭✭✭
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    edited October 31 #5

    "Flash," I say, my Shiny Gardevoir shimmering brightly. A flock of Pidgeys fly out from the trees around us, bumping into each other and wobbling, dazed by the sudden light. I groan with annoyance, Gardevoir walking next to me with a sigh. We've gone through what has to be half of the forest and we still haven't found any Ghost-types! I look around in the darkness, searching for another area to try. "I don't think we've been over there," I say walking to my right, Gardevoir following behind me. We stop and I give her a nod. She immediately starts glowing brightly. When she stops, I look around, disappointed when nothing comes out. We hang our heads sadly as we continue our aimless search through the forest. I'm about to lose hope, but then a woman's scream of terror breaks through the silent night.

    (Sorry that took so long! My little cousins came over and we don't see each other often, so they wanted all my attention. I don't mind that, but I'm sorry if that annoyed anyone. I hope it's okay giving them a shiny. Looking forward to the next part!)

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 2,036 ✭✭✭✭
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    I'm so mad at myself!

    You said the two people said the Ghost was in the woods.

    I made them search the city

    Would you like me to rewrite it to match it?

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 2,036 ✭✭✭✭
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  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 2,036 ✭✭✭✭
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    Went ahead and edited it

  • MonstaDash
    MonstaDash Member Posts: 793 ✭✭✭
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    Can I write next?

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 2,036 ✭✭✭✭
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    I am curious about something

    How many paragraphs will this be?

    I'm hoping a lot that way the ending doesn't feel short or rushed, but I know it can't really be too many or else it will feel long and boring.