Pokemon Forums Edition: Part 14
Esbern ran in, holding a whole bunch of baked goods. He had a bit of a sweet tooth.
Esbern: Hey Blake! Sorry I'm late, I saw some pastries and… anyways, what happened to Sophie? I saw her running away from here crying. Did you do something…?
Blake: N-no! I was just letting Yamask out and her Popplio started attacking it! Then she just gave Popplio to Nurse Joy for a bit and ran off! Do you think it had something to do with Popplio?
Esbern: Maybe… come on! Get Popplio and let's go!
Blake politely takes Popplio back before running after Esbern
Blake: We don't even know where she went! Slow down!
Esbern: I know Sophie! She probably went to that scenic overlook just before town.
Blake: Oh yeah… the one that looks like it's from a social media post! That place is stupid…
Esbern: Just hurry up!
Eventually, they make it to the overlook, where they spot Sophie sitting on a bench
Blake: Hey, Soph… you okay?
Sophie: Y-yeah… I'm fine. Just thinking.
Blake: You sure you're okay? You look like you're about to-
Sophie starts sobbing a little bit Sophie: I feel like I'm not a good trainer… Popplio wouldn't even listen to me…
Esbern: Sophie, let's be real, you're doing the best out of the three of us! Popplio loves you, she just isn't used to new faces is all…
Sophie: You think so…?
Esbern: Yeah. We even brought Popplio to say sorry.
Sophie immediately grabbed Popplio and hugged her, before hugging the boys.
Sophie: Thank you guys.
The trio then decided to call it quits for the night, and go to the PokeCenter to sleep for the night.
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next up is a dream world chapter @UnovanZorua or @Michael629303 would one of you do it
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Great Job!!
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really good! (This is meowy’s alt)
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I can do it, but it might take a while since I've been a little busy lately. I'll try my best to finish it as soon as possible.
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Also, should we make a post to set what the characters personalities, goals, fears, likes, dislikes, etc. are to make it easier to write them? Not a new episode, just a post for everyone to reference while writing.
I'm not going to make it all on my own though, I'm probably going to make a post where all of us can discuss what we think the characters are like first, and then post a final version, since there are multiple people working on this story.
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I like the idea. It will help align everyone with what the characters are.
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Wait, is this part 13 or 14? I know the name says 14 but I'm pretty sure the previous episode was part 12.
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wait this is supposed to be 13 your completely right since I wrote 10 @Michael629303 wrote 11 and @Meowy11111 wrote 12 so this was supposed to be 13
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