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Pokemon Forums Edition: Chapter 5

Acornyo
Acornyo Member Posts: 732 ✭✭✭✭
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Deep in the heart of the forest, the Professor's Assistant, Copper, was keeping a watch on Team Paradox's operations, all the whilst keep tabs on them. He's sitting on top of a nearby hill with his trusty Pokemon, Boltund.

"Alright, buddy. We have all the data we need, so why don't we go and do what we actually came here to do?" Boltund barked happily before following Copper's lead down the hill.

It wasn't long before a Team Paradox Grunt spotted them. "What are you doin' here? I can tell from that goofy broach on your neck that you work for Professor Pine! Now step back!"

Copper just laughed. "I was just walking my Boltund over here! He has a gift for you. Want to give them the "gift" buddy?" Boltund barked excitedly and wagged his tail. "Show 'em, buddy!"

And with that, Boltund gave them his gift, Electro Ball! He aimed it straight for their supercomputer, causing it to start glitching and self-destruct, but not before Copper and Boltund ran far away.

"Good job, buddy! Now to call that kid…" Copper then pulled out his Rotom-Phone and dialed our hero, Arlo. The phone rang before being picked up. "Hey, you're Arlo, right? No time to talk, but I'm Professor Pine's assistant, and he told me to give you something. Meet you at Woodle City once you get 3 badges, alright? Thank you, bye!"

And with that, Copper hung up.

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  • Specter478
    Specter478 Member Posts: 303 ✭✭✭
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    Good story

  • clasingla
    clasingla Member Posts: 3,081 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    I’m curious if this is unfinished it ended saying that they should meet main character in woodle city are you going to do the meetup?
    this story was really written good 5/5 stars

  • UnovanZorua
    UnovanZorua Member Posts: 2,164 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    That name jumpscared me.

    Maybe there should be a set name for this, preferably one that doesn't overlap with a previous story

  • clasingla
    clasingla Member Posts: 3,081 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    did you split it into parts cause. It left on some part that still seems like you should write you did a great job I liked how you wrote it

  • Acornyo
    Acornyo Member Posts: 732 ✭✭✭✭
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    @clasingla wait, sorry, but how many badges does our boy Arlo have again?

  • clasingla
    clasingla Member Posts: 3,081 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    3 so far

  • Acornyo
    Acornyo Member Posts: 732 ✭✭✭✭
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    @clasingla Yeah, I'm gonna continue writing, just wanted to see if this gets approved.

    @UnovanZorua I see where you're at! I'll just make a placeholder name until we come up with something different. "Becoming A Master" is what I got so far. Sorry about the jumpscare!

  • Pokemaster9293
    Pokemaster9293 Member Posts: 759 ✭✭✭
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    nice story

  • Eremas
    Eremas Member Posts: 977 ✭✭✭
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    liked it a lot. Giving a story to a pokemon professor's assistant is cool

  • Specter478
    Specter478 Member Posts: 303 ✭✭✭
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    Why do people keep flagging are story's????