New PLA Manga Authors

It was a bright day in hisui, the sun was shining, the starlys were chirping. Jubalife city was normal except for in the main plaza. In the main plaza a few old friends had reunited.

A young girl of about 20 laughed, “Adaman did you lose her? Irada is going to kill you!” 

The man said, “Akari, keep it down. Look, her and I entered the town and I stopped to look at the general stores wares because there is so much interesting stuff. I am still on the fence about the pokéballs. While I understand all of the old superstitions are not true they still…” 

Akari snapped, “Adaman! Stay on point we have to find Christa!”

“Oh, right. She must have wandered off because when I turned around she was gone,” the man replied.

Akari started walking off, “C’mon we just got to check all the interesting places before Irada gets here.”

The duo quickly arrived at the dojo where a battle between two villagers was taking place.

“Ugh, she isn’t here, I thought with the noise and excitement of the new battle program we have set up she would be locked in,” Akari stated.

“Maybe you know your village, but I know my daughter.” Adaman replied as he began walking around the court.

“What do you mean?” Akari followed him.

Adaman explained, “She loves Pokémon so much that if she saw this it would be scary because it looks like two alphas clashing, she hasn’t mastered keeping her ground or making eye contact when there is a scary Pokémon so most likely she would run behind a building.”

“Oh, the poor thing,” Akari sympatheticly exclaimed.

When they appeared behind the shed a little girl sat crying on the ground.

Adaman ran up to her and began helping her get through the traumatizing experience.

*Snif snif, “Those two poor Pokdemon were hurting themselves,” She said in her childish voice.

Adaman tried to comfort her but no matter what he tried she kept crying.

Irada came storming in, “What are you doing?! Trying to traumatize her with a Pokémon battle! Adaman! You of all people should know better than that, as a leader of a whole clan! Christa dear, come here. Is this not a fun place?”

As christa calmed down and ran over to her mommy Adaman responded, “Look, I promise it isn’t like that, let me explain.”

After going back to the main plaza they explained the tale of Adamans incompetence and comforted little Christa.

@Joeybear7 do I have a chance of passing? Is it too long, too short, or just right?

Thank you!