New PLA Manga Authors
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Can’t wait to read it.
Sounds good.
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Thank you for the consideration @Joeybear7 . However I agree that the job should go to @Thur55555555555, as Thur's natural talent far surpasses my own.
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Thank you but it is not natural, I have had to work hard. I bet you would do good in something else though.
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ok, @Thur55555555555, in 24 Hours we will see if you get the job
Don’t underestimate yourself, this is as good as @Hades0918! I think you just need a step in the right direction, that’s where I come in!
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Sounds good. (Wait, I am as good as @Hades0918!!! Wow!!!) I am not too good in some situations but by chance this situation you think of everything I can’t.
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There might be some repeated posts here. That's another issue. I don't even know where half my comments go.
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Good luck to you all! I'm looking forward to seeing your creations!
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yea look at these
A adolescent female approaches Hotel Z, looking up at the run-down building with disappointment.
The trainers powerful enough to destroy me lives in this dump?she thinks, shaking her head as she enter the place.As she walks in, a bell dings throughout the hotel, signaling her entrance. "I'll meet you at the desk." calls a voice that makes the customer's blood boil.
I know that voice!She thinks, her lips curling into a cruel smile. Taunie walks to the desk, smiling at her.The pink haired girl that helped with my downfall!"Hello." Taunie exclaims happily as she gets behind the front desk. "Are you wanting to stay at Hotel Z?"
The female nods. "Yes," she responds slowly, like words are new to her. "I want to stay at Hotel Z."
"Great!” Tanie exclaims, too excited to notice the strange way the female spoke. "Also, I love your hair! Black with red on the right blue on left is really cute, And the contacts to match really complete the look!"
"O-Oh," the girl stutters, not expecting a compliment. "Thanks. This is natural."
Tawine’s eyes widen with surprise. "Really?" she asks. "Well that's cool! Anyways, what's your name? Need it for your room."
The heterochomic tilts her head. "You don't recognize me?" she asks, mocking a pout when Taunie shakes her. "When you beat somebody as badly as you did me, it’s only manners to remember them."
Taunie seems like this makes sense to her, nodding her head. "Ah, you're from the Z-A Royal." she says. "Sorry, but I don't pay attention to the people I battle there."
The girl chuckles, shaking her head. "No… Not in that." she tells Taunie. "You beat me in something much bigger..."
The elevator door pings as it opens. Both females look over and sees Paxton, who's staring at the mysterious customer with fear. "You!" he question, much to the girl's pleasure.
There he is,the girl thinks.The one that truly was my destroyer, The one that Zygarde itself chose and even achieved Mega Evolution withHer eyes slightly narrow at him.Paxton!"You know her?" Taunie asks, looking between the two of them. Paxton looks at her, shocked.
"How do you not recognize her!" he asks, pointing at the female, who is smiling widely, enjoying Paxton's reaction. "Look at the colors!"
Taunie looks back at the girl, studying her closely. "I mean, yeah the color pallet looks familiar…" she mumbles, then sighs. "Can you just tell me your name?"
She looks at Taunie, smiling with fake innocents. "Ange." she replies, relishing how mortified Taunie looks.
'Wh-What!" Taunie exclaims, shaking her head. "No! How? W-We beat you! You're a tower! How are you human?"
Ange shrugs. "I'll never say." she says with a smirk, tapping her lips with an index finger... Suddenly, the door slams open, Zygarde (10% Forme) standing in the doorway, L close behind.
The central parts of Ange's hair turn purple, her eyes narrowing on the dog. "Hello, Zygarde…" she spits, mad at Zygarde for what it did to her, contradicting her smile.
"What is happening!?" Taunie yells in confusion.
It was a bright day in hisui, the sun was shining, the starlys were chirping. Jubalife city was normal except for in the main plaza. In the main plaza a few old friends had reunited.
A young girl of about 20 laughed, “Adaman did you lose her? Irida is going to kill you!”
The man said, “Akari, keep it down. Look, her and I entered the town and I stopped to look at the general stores wares because there is so much interesting stuff. I am still on the fence about the pokéballs. While I understand all of the old superstitions are not true they still…”
Akari snapped, “Adaman! Stay on point we have to find Christa!”
“Oh, right. She must have wandered off because when I turned around she was gone,” the man replied.
Akari started walking off, “C’mon we just got to check all the interesting places before Irida gets here.”
The duo quickly arrived at the dojo where a battle between two villagers was taking place.
“Ugh, she isn’t here, I thought with the noise and excitement of the new battle program we have set up she would be locked in,” Akari stated.
“Maybe you know your village, but I know my daughter.” Adaman replied as he began walking around the court.
“What do you mean?” Akari followed him.
Adaman explained, “She loves Pokémon so much that if she saw this it would be scary because it looks like two alphas clashing, she hasn’t mastered keeping her ground or making eye contact when there is a scary Pokémon so most likely she would run behind a building.”
“Oh, the poor thing,” Akari sympatheticly exclaimed.
When they appeared behind the shed a little girl sat crying on the ground.
Adaman ran up to her and began helping her get through the traumatizing experience.
Snif snif, “Those two poor Pokdemon were hurting themselves,” She said in her childish voice.
Adaman tried to comfort her but no matter what he tried she kept crying.
Irida came storming in, “What are you doing?! Trying to traumatize her with a Pokémon battle! Adaman! You of all people should know better than that, as a leader of a whole clan! Christa dear, come here. Is this not a fun place?”
As christa calmed down and ran over to her mommy Adaman responded, “Look, I promise it isn’t like that, let me explain.”
After going back to the main plaza they explained the tale of Adamans incompetence and comforted little Christa.
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You think those are on par with each other? I have read them both and they are both great although I do not see myself in a fit position to truly state of my own work.
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