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Let Make Vol.2 Of Our Romance Manga

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  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 3,103 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    Yes

    A lot of the parts are going to sound a lot like my outline, but that's because I think this part of my outline did a pretty good job

    It will be different with more details, but you'll see that it's pretty similar

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 3,103 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    Paxton and Taunie are waiting in the lobby of Hotel Z. They called the taxi about half an hour ago, so it should be here any minute. Paxton has been eyeing the white bag Taunie has the whole time. He finally decides to ask.

    "What's in the bag," he asks, curiosity taking over.

    Taunie smiles. "You'll find out after our date."

    Paxton is about to push for more, but there is a "beep" outside. The cab has arrived! The two of them leave the hotel, and when they get to the car the man looks annoyed.

    "To Restaurant Le Wow, please," Paxton says as they enter the car. The driver doesn't do anything. Instead, he just stares at the two of them.

    "You're Paxton, right," he asks. "The up and rising new trainer?"

    "Um, I guess," Paxton responds. He always forgets that he's well known.

    "Good. I've been wanting a battle but everyone that's gotten in has had cash. We're gonna battle," the driver states.

    "But we have money," Taunie exclaims. The guy scoffs and rolls his eyes.

    "Don't care," he snaps back. "I want a battle. No fight no drive."

    "I guess we can battle," Paxton says, getting back out of the car. The man chuckles as he does the same.

    "If you have to," Taunie says with a sigh, following the other two. "Make it quick, though. I've waited too long for tonight!"

    Once a decent distance away from one another, they pull out a PokeBall. "This is a one-on-one," the driver shouts.

    Paxton nods. "Not a problem!"

    The two guys send out their Pokémon. Paxton is using Feraligatr and the man sends out a Beartic. The two Pokémon roar powerfully, each trying to intimidate the other.

    "Let's go, Slash," the cabbie commands, throwing his fist out. Beartic starts dashing at Feraligatr, claws extended.

    "Breaking Swipes," Paxton shout. Feraligatr's tail glows as it swings it at the Beartic, who counters it with the Slash. The two Pokémon are at a temporary stand still as they push against each other. After a bit, they both end up getting knocked back.

    "Get back in there, Ice Punch," yells the guy. Beartic pushes off the ground, fist clench and frozen.

    "Meet it with Crunch," Paxton responds, swiping his arm through the air. Feraligatr leaps forward. Beartic throws its fist out, right into Feraligatr's open mouth. Feraligatr chomps down, locking its jaw. The Beartic tries to escape but to know avail, causing the driver to panic. "End it now! Superpower!"

    At Paxton's command Feraligatr yanks its head back, pulling in the Beartic. It releases Ice type and quickly strikes it with its palm before it can dodge. The Beartic howls as it's sent flying back. When it hits the ground it's unconscious.

    The man stands still, staring at his Pokémon with disbelief. Then, he starts laughing. "Yeah, kid! That's what I needed! Great battle."

    Paxton smiles. "Yeah, you too!"

    "Great! Y'all fought," Taunie exclaims, her annoyance evident. "Can we go now?"

    "Of coarse," the guy says happily, going back to his car. "To Restaurant Le Wow!"

    "Thank you," Taunie says with a sigh, getting into the vehicle, Paxton following. The car hums as it starts up. They pull off and drive to their date.

    Alright, so this is right before the date scene

    Not what you asked for, but I thought of it and thought it might be a nice addition

    For the Side Quest in Wild Zone Two, I'm thinking it will be an Alpha Gyrados on the loose

    I need to know what other Pokémon Paxton should have on his team for that part

    I just know that he cannonly has Feraligatr because he's always shown with Totodile in advertisement

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 3,103 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    So my weekend was much more hectic and exhausting than I anticipated

    A lot happened and I was emotionally, physically, and mentally drained

    I didn't really work on this much and will get it done throughout the week

    It's not just this one, though

    I had a bunch of my fictions I wanted to work on but I couldn't

    Anyways, like I said, I'll get this done throughout the week

  • Joeybear7
    Joeybear7 Member Posts: 274 ✭✭✭
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    mine to I got grounded sorry for not telling you but it was without warning

  • Joeybear7
    Joeybear7 Member Posts: 274 ✭✭✭
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    1. Beartic is not (Yet) In Legends ZA (Could be in Mega Dimension)
    2. THE ALPHA MAGIKARP EVLOVED!
    3. Maybe Paxton could have caught a APLHA male Mewostick in Wild zone 9 to go with Taunie Female one
    4. A Shiny Alpha pumpkaboo, Shunned From its kind for looking Different, Named Patch (Going with its Exile it where’s a pumpkin Rind as a eyepatch. We can see Patch meet Paxton in a flashback he tells Taunie (I have my moments of creativity. Don’t think I’m useless in this project.)
  • Joeybear7
    Joeybear7 Member Posts: 274 ✭✭✭
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    oh and about that present. What if it’s a petal from Ange Floette’s Red Eternal Flower that she found in Wild Zone 20

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 3,103 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    I haven't been ignoring you

    I didn't want to erase what I had but it wasn't much so I can retype it

    These sound good!

    I'm thinking about using Patch in the next volume

    The cabbie could be a foreigner

    And the gift idea can work, but I haven't finished post game yet, so if it is a reference to something I don't know it yet

  • Joeybear7
    Joeybear7 Member Posts: 274 ✭✭✭
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    no but Ange did Make 3 of the flowers… but I just had a idea for vol 4 but we will cross that bridge when we come to it. Also we are friends so you would not ignore me, I trust you and @Catcatmyoop with this project. Truth be told, I’ve had hundreds of ideas like this but never had the resources to do them and this is the one I found the resources so I will not let up.

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 3,103 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    Don't worry, I won't ignore you

    Sometimes I might take a while to respond, but I'll still be here

    I make sure to at least react

  • Joeybear7
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