Let Make Vol.2 Of Our Romance Manga
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I appreciate the advice, but what I was saying is I think the outline explains my idea pretty well for the ending
The only reason it disappoints me is because I had my mind dead set on making sure I wrote the whole thing as a narrative, that when I tried to make the ending and couldn't think of anything but my outline I was upset
If you're wanting me to make a narrative for the ending, though, I can try
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"Why aren't you ordering," Paxton asks.
Taunie's eyes widen with surprise. "I've been waiting for you to," she responds.
"I already did," he says, confused.
"No, for me," she clarifies.
Paxton's eyebrows furrow with confusion. "Why would I do that?"
"I don't know! It's expected," Taunie exclaims.
"Who said that," Paxton questions.
"Jacinthe," Taunie replies. Paxton continues to look at her with confusion and she sighs. "So there was no party. When I got there, she told me she tricked me and wanted to give me dating advice. She told me the male does everything. Get me out the car, open the door, make the order, etc," she explains.
"I was going to do the first two things, but Grisham and Griselle told me not to," Paxton tells Taunie, who's now the confused one.
"You talked them about tonight," she asks, and Paxton laughs, shaking his head.
"No. Not by choice, anyways. They sat me down and talked me about it," he says. "They told me not to really do anything for you because it will make you think I think you're dependent on me."
Taunie shakes her. "That's not what I would have thought," she exclaims.
Paxton nods. "Didn't think so. But they're the one with relationship experience, so I took their word for it."
Taunie chuckles. "Yeah, I get that. That's why I listened to Jacinthe." She sighs. "Alright, how about this. From now on, we'll figure our relationship out on our own. We'll decide what we should do for or expect from one another." Taunie raises her fist. "Yeah?"
Paxton smiles and taps his fist against hers. "Yeah."
"Great. Now I hope you brought money because I was told you're paying," Taunie says, picking up the menu.
Paxton laughs. "Not what I planned, but I can do that."
Hey, so I'm going to be typing it as I think of it, so it will be out of order.
Once I have my full idea for the ending written I'm going to put it in order in a comment
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Okay so, I might have to take a couple of CrEaTiVe LiBeRtYs on the story and script because I have a certain drawing and writing style but I will mainly be using that outline for the main part. And you guys might have to wait a bit for VOL 1 because I haven't beet Pokemon ZA yet and you might be looking at a January/February release.
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