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  • Voltareon2012
    Voltareon2012 Member Posts: 973 ✭✭✭✭
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    So, I have to choose one character?

    Well, haven’t written with a girl character in a while, and I’m reading a book about hackers rn so I think I’ll use Jaylee (Jay’s real name) working on rivals and other party members now!

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 3,099 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    edited November 14 #63

    I'm using Zayn

    I've got a pretty good idea for him that I'm going to give a quick rundown of it in the comments to make sure it will work before I start writing

    I'm going to wait until I'm in my computer, though, because this stuff is annoying on the phone

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 3,099 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    So what I'm thinking is Zayn's small town is attacked by the Plasma Alliance.

    Maybe his town has something that can awaken or summon the Legendary that gets chosen?

    I'm wanting Girantina, but I'm down for whichever.

    Anyways, the person that was sent (I don't know what rank they should be) demands to talk to the leader of the town.

    Zayn claims it's him, being the best trainer he thinks gives him the authority, and goes up to them.

    The Plasma Alliance requests the Legendary's item.

    Zayn, not knowing what the item is (he's young, 13-14), says okay and goes to hand it over.

    The town elders, the real leaders, interrupt, though.

    They take the object from Zayn right as he's about to hand it to the Plasma Alliance.

    This angers the the ranked official, who says that because Zayn already agreed the item is there by theirs.

    The elders, who know what the object is capable of, refuse to hand it over and tell them to leave.

    The Plasma Alliance make the threat of using brute force.

    Zayn, who thinks he could handle that, laughs and says that he's the best trainer in the world and no matter what they do he can take them.

    The ranked official decides that, since the kid is so great, they will battle.

    Plasma Alliance gets the object if they win, but if Zayn wins they will get out of there.

    Zayn accepts before anyone can stop him and a deal is made.

    The battle starts and Zayn sends out his Absol and the ranked official sends a Toxicroak.

    The battle is practically one-sided, the Toxicroak destroying Absol, which hits Zayn hard in his ego.

    As Absol collapse, one of the Plasma Alliance grunts snatches the item out of the elder's hands and the group leaves, having what they came for.

    Although, just to make them cruel, I could have them destroy the town on their way out.

    Either way works.

    Anyways, the town is furious with Zayn, and the elders explain to him what the item can do and the amount of danger Zayn put the world in.

    It's at this moment Zayn realizes;

    1: He is incredibly weak and

    2: He just made a huge mistake due to his arrogance.

    He leaves the town with Absol, going on a Hero's Journey to actually become the strongest and to get back the Legendary's item from Plasma Alliance.

    Along the way he will struggle with self-doubt, losses, and many other hard times.

    He will have good moments, though

    And by the end of the story he will be a strong trainer and confront the Plasma Alliance, fixing what he did wrong however long ago we want it to be.

    How's that?

  • MonstaDash
    MonstaDash Member Posts: 866 ✭✭✭✭
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    Maybe instead of Zach charging in the leader does and he gets crushed and as the Plasma Alliance leaves Zayn tries to stop them and gets obliterated by the head.

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 3,099 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    Should I start working on chapter one or wait until we decide on a Legendary?

  • MonstaDash
    MonstaDash Member Posts: 866 ✭✭✭✭
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    Wait until the 21st when I give some more info, for now start planning the story out.

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 3,099 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    So when making my characters I restricted myself to one Pokémon, but there isn't actually any rule against multiple

    I'm thinking that on his journey to get stronger and to get back at the Plasma Alliance Zayn builds a team along the way

    Would that be okay or do you prefer us to keep the trainer's Pokémon at one?

  • MonstaDash
    MonstaDash Member Posts: 866 ✭✭✭✭
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    You can have the trainer have as many pokemon as you would like, as long as its a legal team.

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 3,099 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    Alright!

    He will slowly build a team of six on his travels

    Shynx and Starly will be in the early parts and I'm figuring out the rest