Pokemon, The High School Life 12
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I am conflicted in either giving Charz a redemption arc or have him get worse. I will give a preview of the latter.
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In my part I have amplified the pure cruelness of the bullies.
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My part isn't ready, I am just posting a sample.
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I went for redemption, but the alternate sample will still come
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I am gonna address it in the story.
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Thur decides to make a call.
"Hey Zane, I heard that you got ratted on." Thur listens "...Listen, I think I know who your weasel is...Yeah, it's lover boy... That is good to hear, see ya."
Thur hangs up and leaves the school with a smile on his face.
---Later---
Zane got Jay and Charz to wait outside of the school for who they believe is the one that snitched. After some time their target comes out from detention.
"You ever heard of an old saying?" Zane says to the target "The saying goes... Snitches get stitches..."
The trio were waiting for Devil, they knew he had gotten detention so they didn't have to worry about any crowds.
"Hey look, it's the Backstreet Boys! How lucky am I to get a special visit from the school's top celebrities!" Devil says with a chuckle.
Zane signals to his thugs and they grab Devil and take him to a more secluded part of the school. Zane and Jay are taking turns beating up Devil while Charz is watching. Charz is wondering why they are being so cruel to Devil, sure he messed up their plans but he doesn't deserve this. Zane was finishing up and Devil could barely move, but as Zane is walking away he hears laughing from behind him. The laughing is weak, but Devil knows that it will get under Zane's skin.
"You want more you little Weavile?" Zane says with a menacing look "Haven't had enough?"
"Heh... It seems that your scapegoat hasn't had enough, I think I get it now..." Devil says with a weak grin "Thur can't stand that Vee couldn't care less about him!" Devil bursts into a mad laughter "That girl saw how much of a lowlife thug he is, but hey it seems that you three are no better than him! Even Mr. Nice Guy Charz is just as much of a lowlife as you!"
Over the laughter Zane was fuming with rage and called over Charz "Charz, use Flamethrower and shut him up!"
"But Zane, isn't that going a bit too far?"
"Charz, are you one of us? We have a reputation to uphold, we can't have little stains like him insulting us like that!" Zane says "If you don't do this get out of my face and join those losers!"
Charz thought for a moment about his new friends. On one hand he has everything he has ever wanted, he is finally one of the top MVP's and is a school celebrity. On the other hand he has become a bully, someone despicable. "I have made my choice."
Charz walks up to Devil, and picks him up. "Gonna finish the job, huh? Seems like they-" Before Devil can finish his sentence Charz unleashes Flamethrower and finishes the job. Zane smiles.3
