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  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 25,808 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    #12
    https://community.pokemon.com/en-us/discussion/comment/150047#Comment_150047

    I get that

    I wish I could help but my art is the same level as yours

    Honestly, mine is probably lower

  • UnovanZorua
    UnovanZorua Member Posts: 5,263 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    edited April 27 #13

    I think the art is fine (the only part I have a small problem with is how saturated it is, which is a style opinion. I don't mean "make everything almost white/black," that would also be hard to look at unless you really know how to pull it off, but try to make sure not everything is as bright and saturated as possible. Which is again, more of an opinion on the style. Which is subjective).

    The main problem is the textboxes. If a textbox is too long, split it up across different panels. You can even let it go on to the next page, a comic's first page doesn't need to contain everything. Make sure the text size is readable.

  • Voltareon2012
    Voltareon2012 Member Posts: 2,843 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    #14
    https://community.pokemon.com/en-us/discussion/comment/150022#Comment_150022

    I keep wanting to make something more art-related, but best I can do is sometimes draw characters half-decently in a neutral position. So I just ended up writing it normally, but in a style that was meant to convey a sort of pacing… I dunno I might just be rambling.

  • fineasmatei
    fineasmatei Member Posts: 6,365 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    #15

    i love your art style

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