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  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 27,461 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    edited August 5 #352

    (It was a three way tie so I had Google pick one. I did not know it could do that (figured it was worth a shot, though) but then it started trying to help me make a design and whatnot. No offense to them, but I don't want AI making things for me. I've already got what I think is a solid design, Google chose Drakeon, by the way)

    You look at Jerry, remembering how he's been losing to the Gym Leader for the last three days. You know he probably needs the help and if you leave him you'd practically be setting him up for failure. With a sad sigh you ignore Sephoria and glare at the two criminals in front of you.

    "Alright, let's get this over with," you grumble as you send out Drakeon. The Eeveelution howls upon release, stamping its foot into the ground aggressively. However, when it notices its ex-trainer standing before it the Dragon type's red eyes glow and narrow with anger. It growls lowly and a storm begins to build around its feet as its rage grows.

    "I-Is that…" Jeremy stutters, eyes wide with shock as he sees the furious Drakeon. He doesn't have to finish the sentence. You know exactly what he's trying to ask.

    "Yup. That's the Eevee you ditched," you tell him with a smirk. "You see, when you wrongfully left it I took it in. We have trained hard and look at what it has become! A glorious Drakeon!" The Dragon type's lips lift into a smug smirk as the enemy's surprise turns to regret.

    "D-Doesn't matter," the opposing male states as he sends out a Vaporeon. "I found a better Eevee that's actually good."

    The Water Eeveelution is literally nothing but confidence. It holds itself high, looking down on your Pokémon. Its eyes sparkle with cruel intent as it slowly takes a fighting stance. Jay cackles as she sends out an Annihilape. The angry monkey tilts its head at us, its eyebrow twitching as it clenches its fist tighter. Jerry tosses out a Gabite, which barks powerfully at the opponents.

    "Alright. get this going. Use Breaking Swipe," you command.

    "Acid Armor," Jeremy demands.

    "Get buff! Bulk Up," Jay shouts.

    The Vaporeon melts into the ground for a brief moment before rematerializing with a defense increase right before Drakeon's tail smacks it in the face. The Dragon type slaps the Ghost/Fighting type in the gut before the Bulk Up happens, dealing full damage. Both of the targets' attack go down, but Annihilape's goes back up as it uses its move.

    "Vaporeon, Blizzard," the teen in the suit says with a snap of his fingers. The Water type trills as it launches a burst of ice at you and Jerry's Pokemon.

    "Protect," your rival quickly commands. The Gabite immediately summons a clear shield that completely blocks the hit.

    "Mirror Coat," you shout. Drakeon barely has enough time for its blue scales to shimmer with a light pink before taking the Ice Type attack head on. It whimpers as the Blizzard pushes it back a bit, but the Aggressive Dragon stands its ground.

    As soon as the attack finishes your Pokémon howls and pushes the snow back in a giant magenta beam. Vaporeon yelps as it gets sent flying back. But suddenly the Annihilape is right up in Drakeon's face! You were so focused on the Water type that you didn't notice the other opponent get close...

    "Close Combat," the pink haired girl exclaims with excitement.

    "Take the hit," Jerry shouts from beside you. His Gabite leaps into action, shoving your Dragon type out the way and getting fists violently smashed into its face. With each hit Annihilape's knuckles get scraped from the target's Rough Skin. "Great job. Strike back with Dragon Rush!"

    Gabite screeches as green energy covers it, creating the form of a giant winged dragon. It then kicks off the ground, ramming into the enraged monkey right as it takes the defense decrease from its last attack. "HA! You just set yourself up for a loss! Use Counter," Jay energetically shouts.

    Annihilape howls as it lands a mighty uppercut on the Dragon/Ground type, the hit having enough force to knock the Gabite off its feet. You see this as an opportunity. "Outrage," you command. Drakeon's eyes flash with fury as it locks onto the Rage Monkey and lunges at it.

    "Rage Fist," the opposing teen screams in panic. The Ghost/Fighting type quickly swings its fist at your Dragon type, hitting it right in the face. But Drakeon doesn't seem to notice as it begins violently chomping and slashing the Annihilape. The opponent can't do anything but take the hits, being knocked out as the Eeveelution sends it soaring with a final strike with the tail.

    You let out a proud laugh as Jay angrily returns her fallen Pokemon, but Jeremy quickly ruins your joy by shouting "Ice Beam!" A bright white beam of frozen water suddenly hits Drakeon in the side. The Dragon type staggers a bit but doesn't actually seem to notice as its head snaps over to the last remaining enemy, its mind still in Outrage mode. You look over too and groan with annoyance, finding that the enemy had healed his Pokemon while you were busy fighting Annihilape.

    "Get him," you growl. Drakeon immediately leaps forward, gruesomely mauling the opposing Eeveelution. The Dragon type is relentless with the attack, unleashing all the anger within it as it destroys the target. Drakeon ends the attack with a headbutt to Vaporeon's noggin, bouncing back as the confusion effect kicks in.

    "We've got you now," Jeremy chuckles with a cruel grin. "Blizzard!"

    "Quick! Dragon Rush," Jerry shouts, his Gabite waiting not a second to slam into the enemy, but not before a little bit of ice is released. Both Pokemon collapse from the hit, leaving only your wobbly Drakeon standing.

    "We did it," you exclaim happily, your rival sharing your joy as y'all high five in celebration.

    "NO!!!" Jeremy screeches with rage as he returns his unconscious Vaporeon. "How did you win again!?"

    "Because I'm better than you," you answer simply, only adding to the teen's anger.

    "I… Am… Not… FINISHED!!!" Jeremy screams as he himself lunges at you. You don't move, completely taken by surprise by this action and unsure how to respond. Luckily, a shadowy purple portal opens and a Gengar springs out of it, smacking the boy right out of the air with a cackle.

    "Enough of this," a tired voice booms from above y'all. Everyone in the area turns to the speaker with confusion, finding a tired young man in tattered grey pajamas laying on the roof of the Gym. His sleep deprived eyes scan through the Team of Power members with annoyance. "Leave now or face punishment."

    Okay, so I'm very tired and actually think I'm actually sick right now but I really wanted to get a part done

    It has been so long since I wrote a part and I'm genuinely sorry about that

    Life has been tough lately…

    Anyways, the time for a decision has not come yet but next time I write I'm beginning the Gym Battle so I'd like for you to choose who you start with

    Pokemon are:

    Drakeon (Dragon)

    Lacosian Meowscarada (Grass/Psychic)

    Poiche (Psychic/Poison)

    Shiny Dragonair (Dragon)

    Ceruledge (Fire/Ghost)

    Note that this is the Ghost type Gym

    @Dragonfly102024 @fineasmatei @meLikePKMN @UnovanZorua @Evolve8eon

    Enjoy!

  • Evolve8eon
    Evolve8eon Member Posts: 7,223 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    ceruledge

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 27,461 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    I don't remember which language but I know that's my favorite translation in that whole thread

  • Evolve8eon
    Evolve8eon Member Posts: 7,223 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    That’s the Japanese one,

    I like the Chinese Sawblaze because it sounds more like a real Pokémon but Hellenistinc sounds cooler

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 27,461 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    Yeah, I remember Sawblaze as well but I too find Hellenstinc cooler

  • Evolve8eon
    Evolve8eon Member Posts: 7,223 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    Yeh hellinstinc is cooler because hell and instinct are so raw together, but sawblaze sounds more realistic for Pokémon, seems like a pun they’d make

  • UnovanZorua
    UnovanZorua Member Posts: 5,372 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    Ceruledge

  • PikaCarter2025
    PikaCarter2025 Member Posts: 3,760 ✭✭✭✭✭
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