mystery dungeon part 11 (Draft 3) true cannon version

PokemiiAC · September 23

part one is… unfollowable

clasingla · September 23

https://community.pokemon.com/en-us/discussion/comment/52134#Comment_52134

yeah that’s why I was thinking about redoing it

clasingla · September 23

part 1 redo waiting for approval

clasingla · September 29

https://community.pokemon.com/en-us/discussion/13356/mystery-dungeon-story-part-1-rewrite

clasingla · October 24

https://community.pokemon.com/en-us/discussion/comment/52089#Comment_52089

i have a change of plan there will be no more .5 chapters I feel the final battle will only be in 2 parts and also 2 chapters of him trying to return and an epilogue also one or two more chapters leading up to the final battle

Eremas · October 26

So I reread this chapter because I got up early today and you had a moment of suspense pretty early on but I feel you didn't capitalize on it. And you need more structure to your writing. I like The Hero's Journey as a style personally. And your ending was too cute. I want more suspense.

clasingla · October 26

part 12 waiting for approval

mystery dungeon part 11 (Draft 3) true cannon version

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