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Pokémon Forums edition (Episode 3)

UnovanZorua
UnovanZorua Member Posts: 2,165 ✭✭✭✭✭
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(I wanted to have Rosa in the story, but I forgot this took place around the time BB academy exists, likely 10< years after BW2. So her name is now Sophie.)

(Blake, Esbern, and Sophie chose their Pokémon, Tepig, Chespin, and Popplio respectively.)

"Tepig looks really strong! I'm sure I can become champion with it by my side!" Blake exclaimed loudly, making Esbern's Chespin curl up into a ball and shoot its needles everywhere in its shock. "I know we've all wanted Pokémon since we were little, but can't you be a little quieter?" Esbern said. "Yeah, save some energy for when you reach the Pokémon league!" Sophie giggled. "Sorry..." Blake replied to the two.

"But I can't wait to travel all over Unova either! Just like the heroes who were chosen by Zekrom and Reshiram! Do you think we're going to meet the Legendary Pokémon too?" Sophie smiled. "Of course we are! How else am I going to register it in the Pokédex?" Esbern answered confidently. "Speaking of Pokédexes, there should be some here..." Blake added, as he searched through the package he found the Pokémon in. As they grabbed their Pokédexes excitedly, they got ready to leave their hometown to go into the nearby route and search for Pokémon in the tall grass.

(Also sorry for being late, timezones meant that I started this late at night after making sure it was ok to choose their personalities.)

Next person chooses the route, their hometown and their first Pokémon. Try to use the BW2 versions of places since that was the last time we saw the routes/cities of Unova. You can add things that happen before they reach the route, like a battle between them, or encountering an antagonist or evil team.

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  • UnovanZorua
    UnovanZorua Member Posts: 2,165 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    @Hey_PIKMIN @Michael629303 @Acornyo

    It got approved! This took a bit, making sure I didn't use words incorrectly and making sure I don't mess up horribly since other people are also working on this. What are your thoughts or suggestions? Is there anything you think should have been done differently, especially with the characters? I'm not sure if I did them well, but I wanted them to focus on different goals to make them stand out from each other more, with Blake wanting to become Champion, Esbern wanting to complete the Pokédex, and Sophie wanting to be like the heroes from BW1 and BW2 and meet the Unova legendaries. I'm hoping that this is good and that what I wrote isn't too short or too complicated.

    Also sorry for changing Rosa's name but I felt like it would be better for her to have a different one and since we're still early in the story and I'm the one who chose her I changed it.

  • Michael629303
    Michael629303 Member Posts: 985 ✭✭✭✭
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    This is great. You did a great job on the personalities.

  • Hey_PIKMIN
    Hey_PIKMIN Member Posts: 1,049 ✭✭✭
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    @UnovanZorua Good Job! This is exactly what I had in mind! @Acornyo It's your turn next!