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Time For Vol.4 of our Manga

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  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 5,323 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    I just saw that you anyway have it planned that way!

  • Joeybear7
    Joeybear7 Member Posts: 1,323 ✭✭✭✭
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    yep that’s Part 14, tomorrows part is 13, Christmas’s part (if you have time if not the day after) will be 15

  • Joeybear7
    Joeybear7 Member Posts: 1,323 ✭✭✭✭
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    edited December 24 #244

    btw @Hades0918 im thinking we have 4 “Arcs” in this Vol.

    1. Introduction (Part 1- 11)
    2. Ange VS Anti-Ange (Part 11-~30~) 
    3. Darkness (Part ~30~ to ~45~)
    4. Parasite (Part ~45~ to the end) (Ange’s plan she explained in Part 3: Power From Within)
  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 5,323 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    Okay...

    May I explain my thoughts?

    I figured that after this part (and Shiny Darkrai's) the three would go to lunch, where they discover Ange's bone liking as well as get closer

    I also forgot to include the petal, so that will be brought up in this one

    After that, they leave and find out the pack of Pyroar have escaped and are Rouge Megas

    Of course Taunie and Paxton have to stop it

    Ange tags along since she has nothing better to do, but without Pokémon she can't fight (she doesn't want them knowing of her abilities)

    As she watches the two in action, she sees how much they actually care about Pokémon

    However, this doesn't change her mind about revenge

    We'll see her reasoning of what she did and why it meant so much to her

    After she accidentally saves everyone, Taunie will be extremely happy, thinking it was intentional and she saved them because they are friends

    Paxton pretends to think the same but in reality believes she set it all up to look like a hero and get closer to them

    After that, we'll cut to Grisham in Mable's lab, where he tells her about Ange

    They'll discuss the plan that will be talked about in the next part and Mable agrees to help only if Grisham promises to give Ange to her so she can study her (and maybe a bit of torture)

    Grisham says he's fine with it but needs to talk to Emma about, which Mable says she will do herself

    Next morning Ange meets the rest of the MZ Team (Lida and Naveen)

    Both of them are very skeptical of her

    She doesn't harbor that many bad feelings towards them, so this is her moment of deciding if they need added to her revenge list or not

    The five are just chilling until Zygarde comes bursting in, L close behind

    L tells them that there are two Rouge Megas on the loose

    Right as he says that, Vinnie calls, telling the team what is happening

    So if I may, I'd like to make up the two Mega Evolutions

    Ceruledge and Armarouge

    However, if we must stick with real Megas then Mega Raichu X and Y

    Luckily, the two are attacking together, so they are in the same area

    No need to split up

    The group goes and battles them

    They are right next to the Looker Bureau

    The team fights and Emma helps

    Ange doesn't know Emma, so she isn't suspicious

    However, Emma uses this as a chance to keep an eye on Ange

    Ange watches from the sidelines

    After some fighting, Taunie almost gets hit with a double Thunder

    Paxton doesn't have time to make it to her, but Ange does

    She moves without thinking, summoning Yveltal wings and curling into a ball protecting her and Taunie

    She then uses Light of Ruins, obliterating the two Megas and immediately knocking them out, putting them back to normal

    Everyone looks at Ange in shock, who pretends to be surprised by what she just did

    The whole team celebrates and Paxton starts to believe she's being genuine

    Next part we'll see is Mable and Emma talking about Ange

    Mable doesn't tell Emma that she wants to torture Ange but just asks if she can study her when they get her

    Emma is skeptical, but she doesn't want her bias from Mable's past to effect her decision and agrees

    There will obviously be more to that, but that's all that needs to be said

    Next is Ange hanging out with Naveen

    Her, him, and Lida have actually gotten really close and she decides not to put them on the revenge list

    In fact, she's pretty much forgotten about that

    Paxton comes down and Ange makes an insult, him giving her one in return

    The thing is, they aren't being aggressive with it

    They are being playful, like friends

    Paxton is about to take a seat, but then gets a call

    He walks away to answer

    It's Griselle

    She talks to him about the plan, which now makes Paxton uncomfortable

    He's beginning to like Ange

    They talk about it, Griselle tells him this is the best thing for society, and Paxton agrees

    He comes back to find Ange gone

    Naveen says she said she had urgent business to attend to

    Ange is chasing a Zygarde Cell

    It came to her subtly, telling her to follow

    She want going to, but curiosity got the better of her so she listened

    It takes her to Wild Zone 20

    As she enters, she feels that energy coming from it

    However, it is weaker and almost feels like the tower is in pain

    She can't see Darkrai, though (it's hidden), so she just assumes she's losing her connection with the tower

    Zygarde is waiting for her under it in 10% and she approaches it

    The two talk about her new life

    It reminds her of her revenge by bringing it up, and she admits she's unsure

    It tells her she shouldn't do it, but she says she must

    The two continue to talk, eventuality leaving the topic of revenge and going back to discussing her normal life

    It doesn't challenge her or attack her

    This was literally just to check in on her

    At the end of the conversation, though, Zygarde warns her off an upcoming threat

    One that is a danger to, not only society, but her as well

    The next part is Paxton, Mable, the Gris, and Emma sitting in a room

    They are count over the plan

    As they discuss it, Paxton decides he can't do it

    He tells them that she's not bad and he will have no part in this

    Emma says that she doesn't trust Ange but trusts Paxton

    If he says they shouldn't do it, she's out

    Mable and the Gris, however, let them leave, continuing to plot without them

    They will do it themselves

    Next is a week later

    Ange is sneaking out her room with the keys

    We'll get a brief flashback of how she got them earlier

    She sneaks into Taunie's room, parasiting ger with much sadness

    Then Paxton

    Then, she goes to the lobby, where Patch is

    Since it is a nocturnal Pokémon, makes sense this would happen at night

    Ange tells it she couldn't sleep and they have a talk

    This is when she discovers how Paxton caught it, making Ange feel even worse finding out Paxton isn't a heartless catcher

    There will be more, but that's the point of that part

    Next morning, Taunie and Paxton wake up with severe head aches and exhaustion

    Ange watches them closely

    She doesn't want them to die anymore and hopes they will survive

    Suddenly, Ange gets this random but powerful burst of pain

    Zygarde bursts into the hotel, explaining that there is a threat

    Seeing Paxton and Taunie ill, it knows what happened

    However, it can sense Ange's guilt

    It tells her that they must work together

    Neither are happy about it but do it anyways

    So the battle will start with Zygarde at 10, then 50

    Change to Eye form for Darkrai and then 100

    Then, Zygarde it's about to fall, so it gives Ange the broken Key Stone and holds up its Mega Stone

    Ange tells it she doesn't need it, shooting its Mega Stone with a beam of Mega Energy

    The same energy that turns Pokémon Rouge

    Zygarde gets a huge power boost and they end the battle

    After the fight and Shiny Darkrai is normal, Darkrai asks Ange why she did that, knowing what she is

    She tells it that she's had a change of heart

    It asks why, explaining how it feels about humans

    Ange hears a lot of herself in it and explains what she had realized

    She still holds some resentment, but wants to become better

    She tells Darkrai it should do the same

    She offers to be its partner, and they'll become better together

    It agrees and joins her, no PokéBall used

    That will end this book and the next will go into Ange and Darkrai becoming better and the Gris and Mable continuing to plot

  • Joeybear7
    Joeybear7 Member Posts: 1,323 ✭✭✭✭
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    all good but can you put them in this order

    1. Ange meats Lida & Navven (Part 15 - 20)
    2. Grisham And Mable (Part 21&22)
    3. Dinner + the 7 (yea there are 7) Rouge Mega Pyroar (Part 22-25 for Dinner & Part 25-28 for Rouge Mega Pyroar)
    4. Mable & Emma (Part 29&30)
    5. Some Filer parts (Part 30-35)
    6. Rouge Mega X+Y (Part 35-38)
    7. The Anit-Ange meeting (Part 39&40)
    8. Parasiting (Part 40-43)
    9. Darkrai Arc (Part 43-60)
    10. Resolution (Part 60-66)

    Also in the resolution arc L & Zygarde would move into Hotel Z and Team MZ

    Then VOL.5 picks up from there

    This is going to be fun (Also I just saw a add with Tigers Lions and more driving cars, what has the internet come to)

    Also Ange’s Moves are

    1. Light of Ruin
    2. Geomancy
    3. Oblivion Wing
    4. And More

    Any Thoughts @Hades0918

  • Joeybear7
    Joeybear7 Member Posts: 1,323 ✭✭✭✭
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    edited December 24 #247

    also I had one. In Vol.5 Ange would get a 2nd Pokémon… a Missing.No

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    Thought of that when going to bed what do you think @Hades0918?

  • fineasmatei
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  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 5,323 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    I can't promise each part will be what long, but I'll make them as lond as I can

    That order seems fine to me

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 5,323 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    I'm always down to bring back a classic!

    Would it be a villain or something else?

  • Joeybear7
    Joeybear7 Member Posts: 1,323 ✭✭✭✭
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    don’t think a villian but that thing is… Somthing

    See you tonight with the next part