Let’s make Vol.3 Of our manga

"It rushes out Wild Zone 15 right as the gate fixes itself, barely making it out. It looks around in awe as it sees everything the confinement kept from it. This is the start of a new, better life! "

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It rushes for the Wild Zone 15 gate and right as the gate fixes itself, it barely makes it out. It looks around in awe as it sees everything the confinement kept from it. This is the start of a new, better life! "

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Let me write out what I meant

This is what I meant:

It rushes for the Wild Zone 15 gate and right as the gate fixes itself, it barely makes it out. It looks around in awe as it sees everything the confinement kept from it. This is the start of a new, better life!