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Let’s make Vol.3 Of our manga

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  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 4,491 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    Not weak

    Got something called "school"

    I'm working on it, though

  • Joeybear7
    Joeybear7 Member Posts: 850 ✭✭✭✭
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  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 4,491 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    I will, but if you don't mind me asking, why'd you laugh?

    If it's because of Thanksgiving Break, I'm not doing that

    I've got a bunch of work for collage that's due by the 17th so I have to work hard to get it done

    I'm not gonna leave this, though, so y'all don't have to worry

  • Joeybear7
    Joeybear7 Member Posts: 850 ✭✭✭✭
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    no you said

    ”Not weak

    Got something called "school"”

    That made me laugh

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 4,491 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    I thought you thought I was joking about school

    Sorry

  • Eremas
    Eremas Member Posts: 2,198 ✭✭✭✭
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    it doesn't matter. I had no idea what your answer was going to be. And I am glad you are a nice meber

  • Joeybear7
    Joeybear7 Member Posts: 850 ✭✭✭✭
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  • Hades0918
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    "Heat Crash," Taunie commands, rolling as a Dragon Pulse gets blasted at her.

    "Join it with Superpower," Paxton shouts, barely spinning out of the way as an Aura Sphere shoots by him.

    Mega Emboar covers itself in flames as it leaps into the air, slamming down into the Rouge Mega Lucario. At the same time, Mega Feraligatr smashes its tail into the Lucario, the two hits causing it to stumble. The Rouge Mega Lucario regains its footing quickly, though, howling with so much power it knock Taunie's and Paxton's Pokémon. Its eyes then lock onto Mega Emboar as it kicks off the ground, its aura forming into a bone as it uses Bone Rush on Emboar. Nobody has time to react as it strikes burning pig with a flurry of strikes. There's a blinding flash as Emboar collapses, its Mega Evolution disappearing.

    "That was my last Pokémon," Taunie shouts as she returns it, pocketing her PokeBall. "It's all up to you!"

    Paxton nods with a grunt. Mega Feraligatr, his own last Pokémon, growls at the Rouge Mega Lucario, which just glares back. It's all up to me, he thinks to himself, clenching his fists tightly. I have to save it!

    Lucario dashes forward, hitting Mega Feraligatr with Extreme Speed before Paxton can counter. Feraligatr gets pushed back but doesn't fall. "You good," Paxton asks. Feraligatr nods and growls. "Good. Liquidation!"

    Mega Feraligatr leaps at the Rouge Mega, claws covered in water. As it slashes, the Lucario tries to side step but Feraligatr extends its reach, catching the Lucario and continuing to slam its sharp claws into it, water splashing around as it does.

    "Nice hit," Taunie cheers, giving them a thumbs up. Paxton returns it with a smile, then turning his attention back to the battle. The Lucario escapes Feraligatr's onslaught and fires a Dragon Pulse, which is super effective. Mega Feraligatr howls in agony as it gets sent soaring through the air.

    "Hang there," Paxton hollers as Feraligatr struggles to its feet. It grunts as it fully stands up again, a pained expression on its face. Mega Feraligatr shakes it head, then roaring challengingly at the Rouge Mega Lucario. The dog claps its fists together. As it separates them, a blue orb of energy is in its paws. It pushes out its arms, launching the ball at the alligator.

    "Outrage," Paxton yells, throwing his fist out. Mega Feraligatr's eyes narrow as it howls, the red skin clamping over it as it pushes its arms out in front of it, creating a fake head. It charges through the Aura Sphere, taking the hit and keeps going towards the Lucario, which braces itself for impact. Feraligatr leaps into the air, spreading its arms and uncovering its head. It dives down, clawing, slashing, and biting the Rouge Mega Lucario, which tries to block the hits but can't handle the attacks. Lucario howls as Mega Feraligatr hits it with the final strike, its Mega Power bursting off of it, forming into a Mega Stone, which Taunie catches.

    Lucario lies on the ground, groaning with pain. Taunie walks up to it cautiously. "You okay," she asks gently, helping Lucario sit. It barks softly, nodding. Taunie smiles. "Good."

    Paxton smiles as he watches Taunie help Lucario to its feet. Glad I could do it, he thinks to himself. I would hate it if I couldn't save it.

    Paxton goes to help Taunie support Lucario, but a noise behind him catches his attention. He turns around, meeting the glowing red eyes of a Shiny Alpha Pumpkaboo. It looks scared as he notices it. Paxton smiles at it. "Hey, fella! Wha-"

    The Pumpkaboo squeaks with fear, floating away quickly. "What were you saying," Taunie asks. He turns around and sees her looking at him with confusion. He laughs awkwardly.

    "Oh, it's nothing. I'll meet you at the hotel later," he says, running in the direction the Pumpkaboo went. "I'll meet with you later," he hollers over his shoulder.

    "Uh, okay," Taunie responds, watching him run off. She can't worry about that right now, though. She turns her attention back to Lucario. "Let's get you to a Pokémon Center," she tells it with a small smile. It smiles back, nodding.

    Here's the next part!

    Sorry that I'm not doing the whole thing as one big post

    I'm gonna do this one in parts since I don't have time to do the whole thing in one moment

    It will at least keep the story going

  • Joeybear7
    Joeybear7 Member Posts: 850 ✭✭✭✭
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    edited November 25 #71

    I like when you spilt them up. It lets me do my part in this operation, the stitching & revision’s

    Escapeing Wild Zone 15

    A Shiny Alpha Pumpkaboo floats through Wild Zone 15, its red eyes glowing as it looks at the other Pumpkaboos, which all drift away as it passes. It's used to it, though. Every night, when everyone comes out, this one gets avoided. Why? Because it's different. 

    No other Pumpkaboo even tries to get to know it. They just avoid it. You would think it's fine this treatment by now. It's been this way since it was born. But it still hurts.

    The Shiny Alpha Pumpkaboo is staring at the gate with the 15 on it. The one that blocks it from exploring the world outside. Trainers come in and out, most defeated by the army of Ghost types that live in this small area. Tonight is one of the nights that happens. 

    It watches, it's red eyes looking for any chance of opportunity as the panicked trainer runs out the Wild Zone 15 to heal their Pokémon. Shiny Alpha Pumpkaboo watches with excitement as the green barrier glitches. None of the other Pokémon notice. This is its chance. 

    It rushes out Wild Zone 15 right as the gate fixes itself, barely making it out. It looks around in awe as it sees everything the confinement kept from it. This is the start of a new, better life! 

    Rouge Mega Lucario:

    "Heat Crash," Taunie commands, rolling as a Dragon Pulse gets blasted at her.

    "Join it with Superpower," Paxton shouts, barely spinning out of the way as an Aura Sphere shoots by him.

    Mega Emboar covers itself in flames as it leaps into the air, slamming down into the Rouge Mega Lucario. At the same time, Mega Feraligatr smashes its tail into the Lucario, the two hits causing it to stumble. The Rouge Mega Lucario regains its footing quickly, though, howling with so much power it knock Taunie's and Paxton's Pokémon. Its eyes then lock onto Mega Emboar as it kicks off the ground, its aura forming into a bone as it uses Bone Rush on Emboar. Nobody has time to react as it strikes burning pig with a flurry of strikes. There's a blinding flash as Emboar collapses, its Mega Evolution disappearing.

    "That was my last Pokémon," Taunie shouts as she returns it, pocketing her PokeBall. "It's all up to you!"

    Paxton nods with a grunt. Mega Feraligatr, his own last Pokémon, growls at the Rouge Mega Lucario, which just glares back. It's all up to me, he thinks to himself, clenching his fists tightly. I have to save it!

    Lucario dashes forward, hitting Mega Feraligatr with Extreme Speed before Paxton can counter. Feraligatr gets pushed back but doesn't fall. "You good," Paxton asks. Feraligatr nods and growls. "Good. Liquidation!"

    Mega Feraligatr leaps at the Rouge Mega, claws covered in water. As it slashes, the Lucario tries to side step but Feraligatr extends its reach, catching the Lucario and continuing to slam its sharp claws into it, water splashing around as it does.

    "Nice hit," Taunie cheers, giving them a thumbs up. Paxton returns it with a smile, then turning his attention back to the battle. The Lucario escapes Feraligatr's onslaught and fires a Dragon Pulse, which is super effective. Mega Feraligatr howls in agony as it gets sent soaring through the air. 

    "Hang there," Paxton hollers as Feraligatr struggles to its feet. It grunts as it fully stands up again, a pained expression on its face. Mega Feraligatr shakes it head, then roaring challengingly at the Rouge Mega Lucario. The dog claps its fists together. As it separates them, a blue orb of energy is in its paws. It pushes out its arms, launching the ball at the alligator. 

    "Outrage," Paxton yells, throwing his fist out. Mega Feraligatr's eyes narrow as it howls, the red skin clamping over it as it pushes its arms out in front of it, creating a fake head. It charges through the Aura Sphere, taking the hit and keeps going towards the Lucario, which braces itself for impact. Feraligatr leaps into the air, spreading its arms and uncovering its head. It dives down, clawing, slashing, and biting the Rouge Mega Lucario, which tries to block the hits but can't handle the attacks. Lucario howls as Mega Feraligatr hits it with the final strike, its Mega Power bursting off of it, forming into a Lucarionite, which Taunie catches.

    Lucario lies on the ground, groaning with pain. Taunie walks up to it cautiously. "You okay," she asks gently, helping Lucario sit. It barks softly, nodding. Taunie smiles. "Good." It then grabs one of Tauine’s Pokéballs and Catches itself, it then emerges smiling

    Paxton smiles as he watches Taunie help Lucario to its feet. Glad I could do it, he thinks to himself. I would hate it if I couldn't save it.

    Paxton goes to help Taunie support Lucario, but a noise behind him catches his attention. He turns around, meeting the glowing red eye of a Shiny Alpha Pumpkaboo. It looks scared as he notices it. Paxton smiles at it. "Hey, fella! Wha-"

    The Pumpkaboo squeaks with fear, floating away quickly. "What were you saying," Taunie asks. He turns around and sees her looking at him with confusion. He laughs awkwardly.

    "Oh, it's nothing. I'll meet you at the hotel later," he says, running in the direction the Pumpkaboo went. "I'll meet with you later," he hollers over his shoulder.

    "Uh, okay," Taunie responds, watching him run off. She can't worry about that right now, though. She turns her attention back to Lucario. "Let's get you to a Pokémon Center," she tells it with a small smile. It smiles back, nodding.


    I also made a couple of changes. Can you Spot them