Let’s make Vol.3 Of our manga
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here is the Chain-of-command
- I Kick us off
- @Voltareon2012 Makes the draft
- @Eremas Revises it
- @Hades0918 Makes the full story & dialogue
- Repeat Steps 2-4 Until the full manga is done
- @Catcatmyoop Draws it (The hardest part)
Also a Question for @Hades0918 I once said to @Catcatmyoop “we have your back if not in body then in spirit”. But then you said you have you have their back physically, Do you too know each other IRL?1 -
I need to ask this before I forget again
Am I waiting for @Voltareon2012 before I start writing?
You said they will make the outline
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You made an incomplete draft before he/she go added. You can start with what you had for the parts you did not have @Voltareon2012 will make
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A Shiny Alpha Pumpkaboo floats through Wild Zone 15, its red eyes glowing as it looks at the other Pumpkaboos, which all drift away as it passes. It's used to it, though. Every night, when everyone comes out, this one gets avoided. Why? Because it's different.
No other Pumpkaboo even tries to get to know it. They just avoid it. You would think it's fine this treatment by now. It's been this way since it was born. But it still hurts.
The Shiny Alpha Pumpkaboo is staring at the gate with the 15 on it. The one that blocks it from exploring the world outside. Trainers come in and out, most defeated by the army of Ghost types that live in this small area. Tonight is one of the nights that happens.
It watches, it's red eyes looking for any chance of opportunity as the panicked trainer runs out the Wild Zone 15 to heal their Pokémon. Shiny Alpha Pumpkaboo watches with excitement as the green barrier glitches. None of the other Pokémon notice. This is its chance.
It rushes out Wild Zone 15 right as the gate fixes itself, barely making it out. It looks around in awe as it sees everything the confinement kept from it. This is the start of a new, better life!
I've barely had time today but had to get something done
Did it in the phone, so sorry for any errors
Enjoy!
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