Time For Vol.4 of our Manga
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Great work so far! The dialogue and imagery are excellent! Keep it up, I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
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YAY! Me and now @Lance27466 are excited
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The group get to the scene, surprised to see two Alpha Mega Raichus (one X one Y) attacking the city. The Y stays in the back, blasting everything with Thunderbolts while the X dashes around, crashing into things with Wild Charge. The four grab their PokéBalls, preparing to fight. Ange stands nearby, watching.
"You've got this," she cheers. The four nod and approach the two Megas. Weirdly, no barrier appears. However, the purple and black mist cover the ground, but actually doing anything. Just being.
The MZ Team notice this, too. "Where's the barrier," Taunie questions. Naveen shrugs.
"I don't know," he responds. "And where did this fog come from?"
Paxton shakes his head. "I don't know, but let's not focus on that. We need to save the Raichus and people around them!"
The other three grunt in agreement, all sending out their PokéBalls. Paxton sends out a Chesnaught, Taunie a Meganium, Naveen an Ariados, and Lida a Vanilluxe. The four get closer to the electric mice, which immediately accept them as a challenge.
Ange watches the mist with interest. It's thickest near the Rouge Megas' feet and seems to move away from the others. The situation just keeps getting weirder, Ange thinks. First the barrier changes and now it's just gone. And that mist...
It all just doesn't make sense. And above all else, the fact I didn't cause this means it shouldn't even be possible. She continues to watch the mist, which distractes her from the incoming Thunderbolt.
"Watch out," Taunie shouts. Ange looks up, just in time to see Taunie's Embour jump in front of her with Protect.
"Woah, thanks," Ange exclaims. Taunie smiles and gives a thumbs up right before narrowly dodging a Wild Charge..
"Let's attack the Y together," Paxton shouts. Ange turns her attention to them, seeing that Y is causing a lot of chaos, blasting Thunderbolts in random directions. The other three hum in agreement.
"Heat Crash!"
"Blizzard!"
"Wood Hammer!"
"Poison Jab!"
All four Pokémon charge in, ready to attack. Y seems completely unfazed. Out if nowhere, X rams into Ariados and Vanilluxe. Y then strikes Emboar with Electro Web. Only the Chesnaught's Wood Hammer lands.
Y tanks the hit and jumps back. X joins it and the two grab each other's hands and start rubbing cheeks. This builds up electricity, which they release in a couple giant Thunders. The four scatter, narrowly avoiding each bolt.
Naveen sends out a Sableye and Lida Clawitzer. Emboar returns to Taunie's side, Chesnaught joining Paxton. X is back to dashing around again, Y shooting random bolts from the back. This causes much stress for the team as they have a to avoid Wild Charges and Volt Tackled as well as Thunderbolts. And with Lida using a Water type, it gives her even more need to stress.
Ange goes back to watching the fog. As the X uses moves that damage it in recoil or get hit by an attack, the mist goes into it, seeming to heal any damage done. What is that stuff, Ange thinks. Some of it floats near her feet.
She contemplates for a second before reaching down and touching it. It's cold against her fingers and it gives off a feeling of ominous power. But she can also feel Mega Energy in it. The same one she uses. Well, used. As a tower.
She sits up straight again and sighs. That doesn't make sense, she thinks. I'm not using the Mega Energy anymore, so who or what is?
She sighs again. All these questions are making her brain hurt! She decides to think about that later and turns her attention back to the battle. Naveen is now using a Mega Scrafty, Lida has a Mega Starmie (wich is dodging all attacks with some impressive dance moves), Taunie is using Mega Meganium (so it didn't faint), and Paxton a Mega Malamar (odd choice).
Naveen is taking Y head on, forcing it to focus on him and Scrafty as they fight close range. Lida is annoying X by taunting it to come at her and then doing a spin to dodge and Starmie lands a hit. Taunie is a wild card, switching between hitting the mice with random distant Earthquakes or close up immediate Solar Beams. Paxton is staying in the back, Malamar using a ranged attack when one of the Raichus get close to hitting someone. Ange has to be honest, the team works perfectly with each other, really looking out for one another.
The Raichus are obviously getting tired of this. They back away from the MZ Team and grab each other, rubbing cheeks. They then release giant Thunders again, this time more and bigger. The team's humans dodge, but their Pokémon aren't so lucky. Mega Starmie and Mega Malamar faint and the other two are paralyzed.
Hey
I'm going to do the thing where I comment and then edit on it
I want to scroll around a bit every once in a while but I want to show as I go
Don't add it yet
Updates will be slow
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ok just tell me when you’re finished by saying
@Joeybear7 The Next Part Is Here!
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