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Time For Vol.4 of our Manga

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  • Joeybear7
    Joeybear7 Member Posts: 1,910 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    edited January 5 #682
    1. Introduction ✔️
    2. Zygarde & L Appear✔️
    3. Ange learns she has powers✔️
    4. Paxton & Tawine decide to show Ange Kindness✔️
    5. Ange Fails to Parasite Them✔️
    6. Ange invites Tawine to go Shopping✔️
    7. Ange & Tawine go Shoping✔️
    8. Paxton Promises Tawine to be kind✔️
    9. Ange Invites Paxton to Wild Zone 20✔️
    10. Ange gets her hatred of Pokèballs✔️
    11. They Go to Noverau✔️
    12. Ange Talk’s To Charizard and learns not all humans are bad✔️
    13. Paxton, Emma, and the Gris’s join up VS Ange✔️
    14. Darkrai appears✔️
    15. Paxton, Tawine, & Ange go to Lunch✔️
    16. Ange learns she LOVES bones ✔️
    17. Paxton, Tawine & Ange VS 7 Rouge Mega Pyroar✔️
    18. Darkrai start following Ange✔️
    19. Ange meets Lida & Naveen ✔️
    20. Lida & Ange go to Dance Class✔️
    21. Lida & Ange goes to Noverau and her Hate of humans weekenss✔️
    22. Paxton & Naveen + Ange returns to the hotel❌
    23. Navven 1❌
    24. Navven 2❌
    25. Grisham, Grizzle and Mable❌
    26. Zygarde show up to warn of the Rouge Mega’s ❌
    27. Then the Rouge Mega’s (think you can do all 3 Mini Parts in 1 Saturday)❌
    28. Then Zygarde & Ange’s trip to the junkyard that night❌
    29. Then Darkrai❌
    30. Korrina and Ansha (Paxton asked why there a day late)❌
    31. Ansha & Ange Finding Berrys ❌
    32. Ansha & Ange Finding Hyperspace Berries ❌
    33. Ansha & Ange Making Donuts for everyone (Zygarde & L show up because of the scrumptious smell)❌
    34. Emma & Mable (A Break Away in the story)❌
    35. Korrina & Ange Exploring Luminos with a Mega Stone detector (it keeps pointing at Ange and she learns she can make Mega Stones with her power)❌
    36. Korrina & Ange Showing the Power of Mega Evolution and Z Mega Evolution ❌
    37. Ange Showing Korrina her powers (ends with a cliff hanger as Ange trips blasting Korrina with Rouge Power, In 17 we learn what it is)❌
    38. Ange Gives Korrina wings and she learns she can give others her powers ❌
    39. (The Next Day) Anti Ange Breakup (Emma And Paxton would leave but Mable & The Gris’s would keep trying to destroy/dissect Ange)❌

    That Good @Hades0918

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 6,403 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    If you didn't change anything,then yes

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 6,403 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    Right

    But it didn't seem like you changed anything, so it's fine

  • Joeybear7
    Joeybear7 Member Posts: 1,910 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    @Hades0918 whats your progress next part

  • Hades0918
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  • Joeybear7
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  • Joeybear7
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    edited January 5 #689

    @Hades0918

    At the end (The last 5 parts are the Falling Action) As a sign of trust Ange would give Zygarde 4 humanoid forms, one for each “Battle Forme”

    Pokémon Ange gives human forms to are only her bestest of friends
    10%

    It would look like a normal human

    Eyes: Green

    While most of her skin is white (or tan it’s confusing why the WHITE skin color is Tan!? Who approved of that) the right leg is bright green, and she is blistering fast

    50%

    5 protrusions would pop from its back, when intimidating opponent, they would flare up, shining in bright colors, in this form her skin is like Iron, blocking attacks

    Complete

    It would have the the red, blue, and green arm tentacle things in their normals spots, Red&Blue on the shoulders, Green as a Tail

    Mega

    Zygarde’s Gigantic Cannon is now on its arm

    It’s smaller but Ange Boosted the power in this form so it’s stronger

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 6,403 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    Okay

    I have a quick question

    Why is every humanized Pokémon female?

    I'm just curious

  • Joeybear7
    Joeybear7 Member Posts: 1,910 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    Ange is Female, she would use a VERY small amount of her deoxyribonucalic Acid (DNA) in the giving of human forms, so insignificant that only gender is effective, and if a Pokémon is Male it would still be male Apon getting a human form, but all the Pokémon I have planed to get human forms are genderless so it like add 1(Female) to Zero(Genderless) the production is just 1, like the zero never existed, in there Pokemon forms there are Genderless, though because Deoxys transforms on it’s own power, it would have Male and Female parts, or none of them, because Ange’s Female-ness is not involved