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Time For Vol.4 of our Manga

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  • Joeybear7
    Joeybear7 Member Posts: 854 ✭✭✭✭
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    yea, also let me know how dinner goes and if your parents let you do the YouTube idea

  • Hades0918
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  • Joeybear7
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    now start on the next part I’m excited @Hades0918

  • Joeybear7
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    hey @Hades0918 whats your progress now I cannot wait to see

  • Hades0918
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    Ange can't sleep. She's been tossing and turning all night, watching the clock on the wall tick bye. Taunie and Paxton went to bed hours ago. She heard the doors shut. Just knowing that her soon to be victims are slumbering peacefully right next to her adds too her restlessness. She wishes that she could get her revenge now.

    Wait, why can't she? They're asleep and defenseless right now. It's the perfect time for Ange to strike! She literally bounces out of the bed, landing softly and quietly. She sneaks across the room, peaking out the door to make sure nobody is there. Empty. Perfect.

    She tip-toes down the hall, approaching Paxton's door. Let's start with the one that truly ended me, she thinks with a smirk, twisting the doorknob. However, the handle doesn't budge. She growls quietly. Locked!

    She rushes down the hall to Taunie's room. Maybe I'll have better luck with her, Ange hopes, attempting to open Taunie's door. The doorknob doesn't move. "Dang it," she mutters.

    This will be harder than she thought. It will be pretty hard to steal the keys without them noticing. The only way they'd drop their guard around her is if they were friends, but no way Ange is going to befriend the two! Unless... she just let's them think she's their friend.

    Ange's lips slowly lift into a smirk. She walks back to her room with a plan. She's going to research things that friends do, which she will then do with Taunie and Paxton. They will think she is nice and give their trust to her, which is when Ange will swipe the keys without them noticing. She shuts her room door quietly, rushing over to the computer.

    "Let's do this," she mutters excitedly, beginning her plan.

    Next morning

    Ange walks out of the elevator into the lobby. She didn't sleep much last night, going through the internet to find things to do with friends. She found one that seems efficient.

    As she enters the lounge area, she sees Taunie chilling in one of the chairs looking at a magazine. Ange approaches with a smile she practiced all night. "Taunie," she exclaims.

    Taunie looks up from her magazine, the disgust on her face obvious. "What," she asks, her voice flat.

    "Nothing much," Ange replies, Taunie's dislike not effecting her. "I just want to go shopping and would like to go with someone. Would you be interested?"

    Taunie's eyebrows rise with surprise. "You want to go shopping with me," she questions. Ange nods, causing Taunie more shock. The pink haired girl stands up, smiling. "Sure! I'd love to!"

    "Great," the heterochrome exclaims, smiling wider. Everything is going to plan, she thinks happily. "So, can you tell me what shopping is?"

    Taunie tilts her head. "You don't know," she asks.

    Ange shakes her head. "No. I was literally born yesterday, remember. I've heard it's a fun activity and want to try it."

    Taunie nods. "Oh, yes, it's great," she tells her, pulling out her phone. "Let me invite Paxton."

    Ange raises an eyebrow. "Why would we bring him?"

    "Well, he's my boyfriend," Taunie responds. "We do everything together!"

    Ange is surprised by this news. "Oh, wow. Well, you can tell him we're going, but I don't want to bring him." Taunie looks at her confused. "I want this to be... what was it called… Oh, right! Girl's time!"

    Taunie seems satisfied with that. "Oh, ok!" She sends a text to Paxton and pockets her phone. "Well, let's go shopping!"

    Ange nods, smiling as she follows the pink haired girl out. Things couldn't be going better!

    So the next part will be them shopping and Ange is enjoying it

    After that will be what she plans to do with Paxton (which is when she'll see the petal)

    Sometime in the future there will be a Rouge Mega, which Ange helps defeat

    Then the parasites, which is when Ange realizes she wants to be friends with them and regret it (and the two survive it)

  • Joeybear7
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    Hey @Hades0918
    What if she uses her powers to simply absorb the rouge mega power, she will sit on the side and let them (Paxton and Tawine) fight the Rouge mega (I’m thinking 7 Rouge Alpha Pyroar, and yes the same Pyroar that’s in Wild Zone 17) , but things go south and she instinctually interferes and absorbs the Rouge Mega Power, then she processes that her body just saved their life.

    Reawakening:

    Ange will reawakening, recalling the events that happened in the climax of Pokémon Legend’s Z-A Once the flashback is done we hear ange’s thoughts say 

    “I need to go to that hotel.” 

    “But I would be suspicious if a flower walked to a hotel” 

    “That Pink Haired girl (Taunie) was one of those Humans… that gives me an idea”

    1 Day later Paxton, Taunie, Lida, & Navven are chilling in hotel Z talking about the plans of what to do today when to door Rings…

    Ange Part 1: discovery

    A adolescent female approaches Hotel Z, looking up at the run-down building with disappointment. The trainers powerful enough to destroy me lives in this dump? she thinks, shaking her head as she enter the place. 

    As she walks in, a bell dings throughout the hotel, signaling her entrance. "I'll meet you at the desk." calls a voice that makes the customer's blood boil. 

    I know that voice! She thinks, her lips curling into a cruel smile. Taunie walks to the desk, smiling at her. The pink haired girl that helped with my downfall!

    "Hello." Taunie exclaims happily as she gets behind the front desk. "Are you wanting to stay at Hotel Z?"

    The female nods. "Yes," she responds slowly, like words are new to her. "I want to stay at Hotel Z."

    "Great!” Tanie exclaims, too excited to notice the strange way the female spoke. "Also, I love your hair! Black with red on the right blue on left is really cute, And the contacts to match really complete the look!"

    "O-Oh," the girl stutters, not expecting a compliment. "Thanks. This is natural."

    Tawine’s eyes widen with surprise. "Really?" she asks. "Well that's cool! Anyways, what's your name? Need it for your room."

    The heterochomic tilts her head. "You don't recognize me?" she asks, mocking a pout when Taunie shakes her. "When you beat somebody as badly as you did me, it’s only manners to remember them."

    Taunie seems like this makes sense to her, nodding her head. "Ah, you're from the Z-A Royal." she says. "Sorry, but I don't pay attention to the people I battle there."

    The girl chuckles, shaking her head. "No… Not in that." she tells Taunie. "You beat me in something much bigger..."

    The elevator door pings as it opens. Both females look over and sees Paxton, who's staring at the mysterious customer with fear. "You!" he question, much to the girl's pleasure. 

    There he is, the girl thinks. The one that truly was my destroyer, The one that Zygarde itself chose and even achieved Mega Evolution withHer eyes slightly narrow at him. Paxton!

    "You know her?" Taunie asks, looking between the two of them. Paxton looks at her, shocked. 

    "How do you not recognize her!" he asks, pointing at the female, who is smiling widely, enjoying Paxton's reaction. "Look at the colors!"

    Taunie looks back at the girl, studying her closely. "I mean, yeah the color pallet looks familiar…" she mumbles, then sighs. "Can you just tell me your name?"

    She looks at Taunie, smiling with fake innocents. "Ange." she replies, relishing how mortified Taunie looks. 

    'Wh-What!" Taunie exclaims, shaking her head. "No! How? W-We beat you! You're a tower! How are you human?"

    Ange shrugs. "I'll never say." she says with a smirk, tapping her lips with an index finger... Suddenly, the door slams open, Zygarde (10% Forme) standing in the doorway, L close behind. 

    The central parts of Ange's hair turn purple, her eyes narrowing on the dog. "Hello, Zygarde…" she spits, mad at Zygarde for what it did to her, contradicting her smile.

    "What is happening!?" Taunie yells in confusion.

    Ange Part 2: confrontation

    "So this is what you wanted to show me, Zygarde," L says, looking at Ange, who's still glaring Zygarde. The dog nods, eyes never leaving the heterochomic.

    "So you came here just for me," Ange asks, sarcastically happy. "How… touching."

    Zygarde growls, teeth bared. Ange just continues to smile at it, but her left eye begins to twitch with anger. "L! Please explain what's going on," Taunie exclaims, completely confused. 

    "I'm not entirely sure," L responds, staring at the girl that was once a machine with intrigue. "However, I do know other things. Let's go to the lobby and I'll tell you everything I can."

    "That sounds great," Paxton says. The group walks to the chairs. L, Paxton, Taunie, and Ange takes a seat, Zygarde leaping onto the stool.

    "So what you got on me, old man," Ange asks, putting her feet on the table, watching L closely. 

    "So the other day, Zygarde took me to what’s left of Prism Tower," L tells them. Everyone leans forward, listening intently. "When I got to the top, I found a flower. It was an unusual flower, though. It looked kind of liked that gigantic flower that sprouted from Prism Tower, but smaller, something the size of a human could definitely fit, and be created in.”

    Everyone looks at Ange, who looks just as shocked as they do. "So that's how I was revived…” she asks, sounding surprised.

    "You didn't know," Paxton questions. Ange shakes her head.

    "No," she responds. "I remember thinking that I wanted revenge and that to do it I needed to be human. After that thought, everything went black once that Purple Light hit me. I don't know how long it was dark, but when light came I was human… I immediately went here after collecting myself, determined on getting back at you."

    "My guess is your strong desire for revenge combined with the Mega Energy pooling around you gave you the power to subconsciously create your new body without you even knowing, and also keeping your mind in tacked" L says, looking Ange in her eyes. "That's just a guess, though, I could be wrong."

    The room sits quietly, processing this information. Taunie speaks up first. "So... Ange is just a human now?"

    L shakes his head. "Not quite. There are unnatural things that she can do. Remember when he hair changed to purple and spiked out a bit? That's just a small thing she can do. My bet is she can do anything Eternal Flower Floette can, maybe even a bit of Xerneas and Yveltal, or even other things?”

    Paxton and Taunie look at Ange, eyes wide with interest. "Can you?” they both ask in sync. 

    "I'm not telling," Ange replies with a smirk. Then, she sighs, standing up. "Nice talk. Now would you please give me a room! I'd like to go to bed, being reborn takes a lot out of you. My revenge can wait until tomorrow.”

    "Oh," Taunie exclaims. "Right, of course!" The two of them go over to the desk. Taunie hands Ange a set of keys. "Enjoy your stay!"

    "I will," Ange responds, a bit ominously. Then, she goes to the elevator, heading up to her room. The three watch as the doors shut, Ange giving them a small wave as she gets blocked from their view. 

    "What are we gonna do," Paxton asks once the does fully shut.

    Ange Part 3: Power From Within

    Ange enters room 207, looking at the small room with a disappointed sigh. "Looks just as bad on the inside as it does outside," she mutters to herself. She slides her hand along a nearby tabletop, surprised when no dust comes off. "Very well cleaned, though."

    She looks out the window, out at the large city. “In the glass I can see my reflection.” She stares into her red and blue eyes, the same colors of Xerneas and Yveltal. Ange thinks about what L said, the fact that she might be able to use their powers along with Eternal Flower Floete's abilities. Maybe even more.

    She's not sure if she can do that. Yeah, her hair can change colors. So what? It doesn't mean she has super natural powers!

    ...

    Or does she?

    Ange takes a deep breath, closing her eyes. She remembers the feeling she used to get when she used Light of Ruin. That rush of power that fills her body. When she was a tower with a flower head, she always pushed the power to her head. However, in this human body she thinks it would be best to transfer the energy to her arm. The hand, specifically. 

    Ange's arm starts to tingle and her hand feels... different. She opens her eyes, gasping at what she sees. Her hand had became a flower! Just like the one that used to be her head! She continues to push the power into her hand, it glowing with purple light as it buds open. Right before it releases the beam, though, she stops, the energy fading away and the flower disappearing, her hand going back to normal “Don’t what to blow myself up” she thinks

    Ange smiles, one of genuine joy. “So the old man was right I does still have powers!” She thinks, She decides to attempt Xerneas's abilities. She's never done that before, but she has life right now, so she must have used it somehow. She thinks about her very essence. The fact she's moving, breathing, and thinking. That she has an organic heart in her chest. Ange can feel something begin to grow on her head. She looks in the window and sees two giant horns, that sprout into 8 mini horns, haveing sprouted from her hair. She then decides to try use Yveltal powers and makes her horns retract, she has total control over them

    Excited, she proceeds to try Yveltal's power. She thinks about her death as a tower. How cold the temporary darkness was. She thinks about how nice it will be when Taunie and Paxton die, them feeling the same thing she did, but them for eternity. The thought of it makes her giddy and happy, like a kid trying candy for the first time. Suddenly, two giant red and black wings burst from her back. She looks at them in awe, touching them cautiously. They feel surprisingly soft for the wings of the harbinger of death and destruction 

    These powers are great Plan Bs if Ange's Plan A fails. She doesn't think that Plan A has a chance of failure, though. What she's going to do is destroy Team MZ, especially Taunie and Paxton, from the inside. She is going to plant parasites into there mind, ripping there mind apart from the inside out. It will emotionally rip them to shreds, causing much pain and torture as they become weak, slowly spiraling into insanity. Then she will finish the job, but… if there mind and immune system is powerful… there is a chance that all it will do is a small mindgrain for a day, maybe not even that, and the body will fight off the invader if thing’s changed since her demise. (They did with Paxton and Tawine’s romance but she has no clue that the seed will fail, there mind and body have grown stronger)

    She prefers for them to experience a long time of agony, but if all fails she can quickly end them with her powers. With that comforting thought, she lies down on the shockingly comfortable bed, quickly falling into a wondrous sleep filled with dreams of the Paxton and Tawine’s demise.

    Part 4: Planing

    At the same time of Ange's discovery of her powers

    "What are we going to do," Paxton asks L and Taunie and after the elevator doors finish shutting. Taunie flops into the chair next to him, letting out a heavy sigh. 

    "I don't know," she replies. "It's not like we can keep around her."

    "But you can," L says, both teens immediately looking at him like he's crazy. "You should let her stay at the hotel," he continues. "Be nice and welcoming to her."

    "But she literally said she wants revenge on us," Taunie exclaims, Paxton nodding his head in agreement.

    "Yeah. And I don't think her idea of "revenge" is friendship and kindness," Paxton says, now Taunie nodding. 

    L shakes his head. "It doesn't matter," he states. The two try to argue, but the old man raises his hand, silencing them. "Listen, over these past few days, I've been remembering the man I used to be. I judged others for the way they act, and took dramatic actions to stop them. However, in the end, I got what I asked for. Don't be like me. Even if she is cruel, show her kindness. You'll regret it if you don't."

    Paxton and Taunie see the sadness in his eyes as he speaks and knows that a path of pettiness and rudeness isn't one they want to walk. "Okay," Paxton said after a bit of silence. 

    "We'll try be nice," Taunie continues for him. L smiles softly. 

    "Good," he says. The three of them hear Zygarde bark and turn to it. The dog is standing in the doorway, watching L. "It appears Zygarde is ready for us to go," the old man states, standing up with a grunt. "I'll see you around."

    "Bye L," the couple says, waving at him as he leaves. Once the door is shut, the two turn to each other. 

    "Are we really just going to sit by and let her attack us," Taunie questions, a bit of fear in her voice. Paxton shrugs. 

    "I guess. But if she does try something, we are literally the two strongest trainers in Lumiose. We'll be able to protect ourselves."

    "That's true..." Taunie says slowly. She groans, covering her hands with her face as she slouches into her seat. "We have a girl that was born today and wants us dead, sleeping in the room right above us!"

    Paxton nods. "Pretty much sums that up," he says. They sit on silence for a bit, the only sound being the ticking clock in the background. Then, Taunie yawns loudly. "Why don't we head to bed and figure out what to do in the morning," Paxton asks. 

    Taunie nods, standing up and stretching. "Sounds good." Paxton gets up, as well. The two hug each other, giving a small peck on the lips. 

    "Good night," Paxton tells her, heading to the elevator. 

    "Good night," Taunie replies, watching the doors slowly close. Once they do, she groans, putting her hand over her face. 

    "Things are about to get crazy," she mutters to herself.

    Ange Part 5: Failure

    Ange can't sleep. She's been tossing and turning all night, watching the clock on the wall tick bye. Taunie and Paxton went to bed hours ago. She heard the doors shut. Just knowing that her soon to be victims are slumbering peacefully right next to her adds too her restlessness. She wishes that she could get her revenge now. 

    Wait, why can't she? They're asleep and defenseless right now. It's the perfect time for Ange to strike! She literally bounces out of the bed, landing softly and quietly. She sneaks across the room, peaking out the door to make sure nobody is there. ”Empty, Perfect.”

    She tip-toes down the hall, approaching Paxton's door. Let's start with the one that truly ended me, she thinks with a smirk, twisting the doorknob. However, the handle doesn't budge. She growls quietly. Locked!

    She rushes down the hall to Taunie's room. Maybe I'll have better luck with her, Ange hopes, attempting to open Taunie's door. The doorknob doesn't move. "Dang it," she mutters. 

    This will be harder than she thought. It will be pretty hard to steal the keys without them noticing. The only way they'd drop their guard around her is if they were friends, but no way Ange is going to befriend those two! Unless... she just lets them think she's their friend. Like a wolf in sheep’s clothing

    Ange's lips slowly lift into a smirk. She walks back to her room with a plan. She's going to research things that friends do, which she will then do with Taunie and Paxton. They will think she is nice and give their trust to her, which is when Ange will swipe the keys without them noticing. She shuts her room door quietly, rushing over to a phone Tawine left for guests.

    "Let's do this," she mutters excitedly, beginning her plan… And struggling to learn how a phone works

    Ange Part 6: Next Day

    Ange walks out of the elevator into the lobby. She didn't sleep much last night, going through the internet to find things to do with friends on a phone left in her room. She found 2 that seems efficient, one for Paxton, one for Tawine.

    As she enters the lounge area, she sees Taunie chilling in one of the chairs looking at a magazine. Ange approaches with a smile she practiced all night. "Taunie," she exclaims. 

    Taunie looks up from her magazine, the disgust on her face obvious. "What," she asks, her voice flat. 

    "Nothing much," Ange replies, Taunie's dislike not effecting her. "I just want to go shopping and would like to go with someone. Would you be interested?"

    Taunie's eyebrows rise with surprise. "You want to go shopping with me," she questions. Ange nods, causing Taunie more shock. Tawine stands up, smiling. "Sure! I'd love to!"

    "Great," the heterochrome exclaims, smiling wider. Everything is going to plan, she thinks happily. "So, can you tell me what shopping is?"

    Taunie tilts her head. "You don't know," she asks.

    Ange shakes her head. "No. I was literally born yesterday, remember, I was a machine with no will, or eyes, of its own before, I've heard it's a fun activity and want to try it, saw it on the phone you gave me." 

    Taunie nods. "Oh, yes, it's great," she tells her, pulling out her phone. "Let me invite Paxton."

    Ange raises an eyebrow. "Why would we bring him?"

    "Well, he's my boyfriend," Taunie responds. "We do everything together!"

    Ange is surprised by this news. "Oh, wow. Well, you can tell him we're going, but I don't want to bring him." Taunie looks at her confused. "I want this to be... what was it called… Oh, right! Girl's time!"

    Taunie seems satisfied with that. "Oh, ok!" She sends a text to Paxton and pockets her phone. "Well, let's go shopping!"

    Ange nods, smiling as she follows the pink haired girl out Things couldn't be going better! She Thinks as they go shopping

    Part 7: Two Girls

  • Joeybear7
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    edited December 11 #101

    I made some Changes but look at the start message for the Rouge Battle @Hades0918