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Zayn's Story Outline (Part Two)

Hades0918
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So the chapter after that is Zayn entering a town 

The people here are under attack 

The thing attacking? 

The Plasma Alliance 

There isn't any higher level of authority, though, but just four grunts that's harassing and taking people's money and Pokémon 

Zayn won't sit by and let this happen 

The four people here Zayn will recognize from being part of the group that destroyed his town, so that fills him with rage 

He approaches the grunts, demanding that they stop 

The four immediately recognize him and laugh, poking fun at him 

Zayn challenges them, saying if he wins then they leave this town 

The grunts burst with laughter, thinking the kid is the same weak one they witnessed get crushed months ago 

They agree, thinking there ain't no way they could lose to him 

The four opposing Pokémon are Croagunk, Stunky, Houndour, and Litleo (since it's a mix of different villain teams I figured they could have some foreign Pokémon) 

Zayn sends out Gabite, Monferno, Braixen, and Absol 

The grunts look surprised by his team, but they don't expect a good performance from him 

They get surprised when he beats them up 

The whole battle he commands all four Pokémon with ease 

However, the Croagunk gets in close to Absol, ready to use Reversal 

Zayn doesn't have time to react, but Braixen spurs into action, glowing with light as it blast purple/red flames at the Croagunk, knocking it out 

When its light fades away, Delhox stands before them, wand pointed at the grunts ready to fire (literally!) 

The grunts all return their Pokémon and run, knowing their loss is coming 

So what I'm thinking is Zayn's whole team is on the verge of evolution (except Gabite, which evolves at 48 and not mid-thirties), but Braixen evolved first since traded Pokémon get more Exp 

Also, I'm going to mention him considering using Luxray, showing that it already evolved 

So after that victory, it brings Zayn some joy, knowing that he was able to defeat some of the people that hurt his town 

The town people praise him, calling him a hero and savior 

In the past, Zayn would have accepted this praise happily, letting it feed his ego 

Not now, though 

He tells them it wasn't that big of a deal and just wanted to help 

The town admires his humble response and asks if there is anything they do for him 

He says he just wants to know where the grunts came from 

He's trying to find their base of operations 

The town tells him that they came from Mount Coronet 

And not just them 

Everyone from the organization that attacks them come from the mountain 

Zayn thanks them and sets off, finally having a place to look for 

End of chapter 

The next one will be on Mount Coronet 

The snow is heavy and Zayn is freezing 

He can't think about his cold right now, though 

He's battling a grunt 

He's using Staraptor, which Close Combats the guy's Weavile, which was the grunt's last Pokémon 

The grunt has no choice but to let Zayn into the mountain 

Upon entering, Zayn doesn't see rocks and caves like he did on the lower levels of the mountain 

No 

This is metal walls and flooring, computers, and lights 

Grunts are everywhere 

This is definitely their base! 

Zayn sneaks through the base, crouching behind boxes and tip-toeing down halls 

After much searching for anything that points to the lieutenant that he fought months ago, he finds an elevator 

Thinking that maybe a higher level will have something for him, he presses the button 

When the elevator opens, there's a grunt 

The guy yells "intruder" but Zayn tackles him into the elevator, spamming the close button 

The doors shut but the grunt gets up, sending out a Venipede 

Zayn sends out Inferno, which howls upon release, pounding its fists to its chest 

Zayn demands to speak to the lieutenant (I should give the guy a name! How's Kai?) 

The grunt tells him no and commands Toxic 

There's not much space, so Infernape gets hit, but Zayn doesn't waste time, using Fire Punch 

One hit and the Venipede is out 

That was the grunt's only Pokémon, so he can't do anything now 

Infernape lifts him up against the wall of the elevator with one hand, other pulled back in a fist 

Zayn askes again, where's Kai 

The grunt tells him top floor and Infernape drops him 

Zayn presses the top floor button and takes this time to heal his team 

Once the elevator opens, Zayn steps out 

In the center of the room is Kai, who looks back and his serious face turns to one of amusement upon seeing Zayn 

Zayn demands a battle, wanting the item back when he wins 

Kai laughs and stands up, agreeing happily 

This battle will be six v six 

Kai's team will start with Gyrados, which Zayn challenges with Luxray 

The Gyrados has high defense, so the battle will go on for a good amount of time 

Gyrados's last move will be Rain Dance 

Kai's next Pokémon is Heliolisk, which uses Thunder 

Not very effective but still powerful 

Zayn uses his own Thunder, and after the move he notices Heliolisk gets a bit of a heal 

Realizing the ability is Dry Skin, Zayn uses Volt Switch, sending out Infernape 

With Fire being weakened in rain but strengthened by Dry Skin, it kind of evens out fire damage 

Plus Fighting moves being super effective, Infernape wins 

Kai sends out a Dragalge, using Hydro Pump and instantly taking Infernape out 

Zayn switches in Delphox, immediately using Psychic 

Dragalge takes the hit and survives 

The battle goes on, Delphox gets Poisoned but comes out on top 

Kai then sends out Scolipede 

While weak to Fire and Psychic, it uses Venoshock right off the bat 

Doubled by the Poison and the Pokémon already weak, Delphox falls 

Zayn sends out Staraptor and uses Hurricane 

In the rain it doesn't miss and is stronger, as well as being super effective 

Scolipede falls, getting replaced by Kai's final Pokemon 

Toxicroak 

Staraptor has the advantage, but Zayn wants Absol to do the honors, getting back at Toxicroak for its victory all those months ago 

The lieutenant laughs at Zayn's choice but doesn't stop him 

The battle drags on, both Pokémon taking and dealing blows 

In the end, though, Absol comes out on top with a Psycho Cut 

Zayn demands the item back and Kai laughs 

He says even if he wanted to give it back he can't 

Chairman Aaron already has it 

Zayn asks where Aaron is and Kai says he doesn't have that information 

If Zayn wants that, he needs to talk to someone higher than him 

Zayn asks who that would be and the elevator dings, a woman walking out 

She says that would be her 

She's a head 

Let's give her the name… 

Matilda (the name means powerful in battle) 

Zayn tells her to tell him where to find Aaron and the woman scoffs, saying if he beats her in battle she will 

Zayn, of coarse, agrees 

She says she won't need more than one Pokémon to finish him, sending out a Lucario 

It takes all of Zayn's remaining team (a weak Absol, full health Staraptor, decent Luxray, and, what wins it for him, not even used yet Garchomp) to barely win 

Matilda is impressed but tells him he's too late 

Aaron is already in a completely different location of your choice @MonstaDash  with the item 

The chapter ends with a devastated but still determined Zayn, rushing out the place to get to Aaron 

That might be two chapters, but I think it could be one 

We'll see 

Anyways, that's Zayn's story 

I figured the next chapter would be the grand finale because this is where Aaron is using the item to get the Legendary 

Epilogue: 

I want him to return to his home town after this (I think his journey will be around 6 to 7 months but I didn't know what you wanted it to be) 

He will return the item and see that the town had been rebuilt quite a bit 

They ask if he's going to stay home, but he says no 

He's come to love being on a journey, getting stronger, meeting those above him, and learning 

The town can see how much he has evolved and respects him, wishing him safe travels 

His story will end with him starting a new adventure 

One for fun instead of revenge 

Went over character limit so I had to break it in two

Sorry