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  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 1,828 ✭✭✭✭
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    I wonder why this isn't working

    It seems like it's targeting you

  • UnovanZorua
    UnovanZorua Member Posts: 3,065 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    Looks like it happens with other comments than that one. Whatever. Anyways, @Hades0918

    I approached Corbeau's character as I played the game from the angle of why he was written like this, instead of why a character would act like this. So to me, he was a bad attempt at yet another twist in this game. It felt like the game was constantly trying to surprise you and subvert your expectations, and Corbeau felt like one of the poorer executions of this idea. He's set up as this evil man who set the interest on a loan so high it ended up going from 100,000 to 1,000,000 and wrote about the interest in the deal in a font too small to read without zooming in, everyone acts like the Rust syndicate are violent with people and force them to do evil work. And then it turns out that the evil unpaid labour he wants you to do is, essentially, rescuing kitties from trees and cleaning up litter at the beach. We never see him once do something that could get the Rust syndicate its reputation outside of absurd interest on loans that can barely be read on the paper and implied threats in his introduction that never happen again. He's even treated as a hero by multiple NPCs, contrary to the entirety of team MZ thinking he's evil or intimidating or scary. It feels like a rushed twist done for the sole sake of surprise. The game also tries a little too hard to make you like him, which rubbed me off the wrong way. Some of his lines feel like "It sure is great how we can all Pocket these Monsters." levels of writing.

    I don't think he's a bad character— he's just written awkwardly in my opinion.

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 1,828 ✭✭✭✭
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    That makes sense

    I feel like he was supposed to be the villain but someone on the team said that it was too simple and obvious so they changed it at last second.

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 1,828 ✭✭✭✭
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    I looked at the Museum and to be honest I don't know what happened!

    I found the artist and walked away. She stayed there and then randomly disappeared. Suddenly, a bunch of figures were on the screen where she used to be! I kept going until I couldn't see the area any more.

    I walked back and the same thing happened in reverse. Blurry figures appeared. They disappeared. Then the artist appeared.

    I watched and still don't fully understand it!

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 1,828 ✭✭✭✭
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    I'm almost done with the credits (which I am enjoying!) but I never noticed the weird line.

    Could you please tell me which it was and why it bothered you?

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 1,828 ✭✭✭✭
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    You're right.

    That was a waste of a wish.

  • UnovanZorua
    UnovanZorua Member Posts: 3,065 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    "We come from all walks of life, yet we crossed paths simply due to our various ties with the city, then butted heads in our promotion matches. And now we're helping each other out."

    It felt like it was a too-loud way to tell a moral of the story. I was focused and immersed in the story but that line ruined it. Like a badly done fourth wall break joke at the worst possible time.

  • UnovanZorua
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  • clasingla
    clasingla Member Posts: 4,640 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    One of the tips I think I picked up from writing is never tell your reader your message make it more like a puzzle where they can piece it together