Pokémon mystery dungeon adventure part 2
Hisuin zorua took Leo to the entrance of the mystery dungeon,
“this is a mystery dungeon” explained the hisuin zorua
“what’s your name” Leo asked
“oh i forgot to introduce myself I’m mirage”
“that was a strange name” Leo thought to himself “but I guess I’m fine with it” when they entered the dungeon leo immediately saw the stairs then exclaimed “oh I can just come back later let’s get some supplies”
Leo finally exited the dungeon mirage chasing after him with all her endurance knowing that was not a good idea to leave after mirage finally caught up to Leo he already grabbed a few stuff they reentered the dungeon
Leo was in shock “the stairs were right here I could have sworn it”
“huh Leo you are naive aren’t you” snickered mirage
Leo started to get furious “why does everyone keep calling him naive”
mirage then explained every time you enter a mystery dungeon everything changes stairs random items and enemies
“Enemies!!!” Gasped Leo “why would people i mean Pokémon try to attack us”
“A lot of us do not know their are rumors that they are illusions” mirage chuckled
After a few more stairs mirage finally provided info that they were close to the exit something suddenly jumped out on top of Leo it was a zigzagoon if Leo was still human he could easily get this zigzagoon off of him but he was stuck in a chikoritas body but something looked off about this zigzagoon it didn’t have any emotion like mirage said it was like an illusion then a yelp came out of Leo “help”
“You know how to attack don’t you” giggled mirage
“Funny thing is I actually don’t” confirmed Leo
“Well focus your attack and it will just come naturally try using razor leaf” tutored mirage
Leo used his strength and leaves started to come out Leo was in great shock the zigzagoon was knocked off of him and fainted
Leo and mirage finally made it to the final stairs right before Leo was about to enter them mirage stopped him in his tracks “I’ve been trying to start a rescue team but I need another person to start it with that’s where you come in I need you to join pleas…” mirage was interrupted mid sentence
“Sure” blurted Leo without any thought
They finally exited out of the mystery dungeon and in front of them was a beautiful town a sight to behold for Leo
Comments
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It's really good so far! Although it would look a lot cleaner with commas and more full stops between different sentences.
But I do like the story, sorry if my advice seemed negative!
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yeah you should put the punctuation marks and whatever
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