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  • Hey_PIKMIN
    Hey_PIKMIN Member Posts: 1,040 ✭✭✭
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    @clasingla

    This acts as if it's the middle of some random story not the beginning, this was completely my fault for ever wanting to quit so at this point I might just make an alternate version of the actual plot for this

  • clasingla
    clasingla Member Posts: 3,059 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    Maybe @Hey_PIKMIN I don’t know though

  • Hey_PIKMIN
    Hey_PIKMIN Member Posts: 1,040 ✭✭✭
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    "If you are interested @MajorBrendan you can do the 11 22 23 44 45 62 and 64 which number 11 continues from @Hey_PIKMIN number 5 so read that first" - Clasingla

    You chose Oshawott!

    Choosing your first Pokemon brings you back to the good old days of Alola before your major loss when you chose your first Pokemon Incineroar, you regret saying goodbye to it. You start on your journey and hear a loud sound as if someone is in pain.

    If you choose to follow the strange sound choose ___

    if you choose to ignore it choose ___ (This is the part you had to continue from but because you didn't pay attention to a clear instruction)

    You follow the strange sound which leads to an old shed, you see a strange old man with a machine he aims it at a Meganium which turns into an egg Will you A. Run to the Pokemon Center to ask your brother for your Incineroar to help you save the Pokemon Or B. Walk into the shed to try and stop him

    That was the other part of this

    Honestly if you're only doing this to pitch it to the Pokemon company then I'm just going to make my own version of these events regardless of what you or @clasingla says

  • MajorBrendan
    MajorBrendan Member Posts: 1,653 ✭✭✭✭
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    Here's the extra part of Choose your adventure that would be that @clasingla would love to go and have a look at.

    At the end of the forest you're at the crossroads, one side that take you to a route for your next gym badge and the other lead you straight to the mountain where you could investigate where the mysterious pokemon come from.

  • MajorBrendan
    MajorBrendan Member Posts: 1,653 ✭✭✭✭
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    I can live with that constructive criticism @clasingla. Also, I made this little choice that would lead to 22 and 23.

    At the end of the forest you're at the crossroads, one side that take you to a route for your next gym badge and the other lead you straight to the mountain where you could investigate where the mysterious pokemon come from.

  • Hey_PIKMIN
    Hey_PIKMIN Member Posts: 1,040 ✭✭✭
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    @clasingla He didn't even continue my story correctly, there's no connection, it's not even the right region

    Also could I have my other storyline back?

  • MajorBrendan
    MajorBrendan Member Posts: 1,653 ✭✭✭✭
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    I can live with that constructive criticism @clasingla. Also, I made this little choice that would lead to 22 and 23

    At the end of the forest you're at the crossroads, one side that take you to a route for your next gym badge and the other lead you straight to the mountain where you could investigate where the mysterious pokemon come from. I also apologize. I would like to introduce team tundra if the player choose the mountain option.