The Pokémon High School 19 (Part 1)
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Glad you think so!
(I forgot you're editing! I'm used to editing my own work (and probably still will, sorry (I just know exactly what I meant to say and it'd be easier to do myself than tell you where I messed up (but if you still find an error definitely call it out!)))
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((((((((((((That’s ok! Only problem I can sense is the overuse of the word exclaim. But while I was editing I did find I hardly had to change anything! Nice work!!))))))))(this does NOT mean everyone else is bad it is just saying @Hades0918 is awesome lol)))))(also that editors are useful)))))))))))))))))))(bye))))))))))))))( @Morpekofreako can you stop talking))))))))))))))(okay fine but did I tell you about that ti—))))))(SHUT IT))))))))(ok bye)))))))))))))))))))))
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(((((I promise you were fine! You could have kept talking!)))))(((((Also, yes, I do tend to abuse exclamation marks lol)))))(((((I consider that to be a sort of signature to my writing, if that makes sense. I also do it with the ellipses...)))))(((((I'm glad you didn't find too many errors! Feels good to know that!)))))
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((((((((((((((No I think that “!” Is fine)))))))))))))))(((((((((((((I mean the literal word “exclaims” lol)))))))))))))))))))((((((((((also yes yes errors are few, and terrors are ew!))))))))))))))))))
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((((Oooooh! That makes sense!))))((((I actually stare at the screen for many minutes at a time trying to think of words to avoid being repetitive... it's exhausting lol))))((((If you can think of another word please do share! I'd love to expand my writing dictionary!))))
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(You try not to be repetitive? I just go with the flow of my mind as long as it stays appropriate.)
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(((((((((hmm i have that same problem sometimes but here’s a lil tip from a nonpro: you COULD say :“‘wallawalla,’ she says as she rolls her eyes” BUT it’ll be much smoother like: “‘wallawalla’ she rolls her eyes”)))))))(((((because this indicates WHO we are talking about, and what she is doing and it is implied that she is the one speaking. This is how I oftentimes keep from saying “said” or “says” fifty times in a paragraph lol. Of course, saying HOW she says “wallawalla” is very important too)))))))(((((((like: “‘wallawalla’ she says annoyedly as she rolls her eyes.” BUT if it was previously stated that she was annoyed at whoever she was saying wallawalla to, the reader will most likely pick up the mood subconsciously anyway so it can be formed like this:))))))))((((((“Mrs. Wallawalla glares at Mr. Skrynx. ‘Wallawalla,’ she rolls her eyes.”))))))))))(((((((I hope this maybe helps some of the people who took the time to read me saying “wallawalla” so many times. )))))))))))))))))
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(can you guys have this convo in spoiler blocks?)
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(((((((((((((((((Why?))))))))))))))))))
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