Miku Mange Vol.1, Project Overchage

make it this long, like I said use the PLZA manga for length and style

Ange Part 1: Discovery

A adolescent female approaches Hotel Z, looking up at the run-down building with disappointment. The trainers powerful enough to destroy me lives in this dump? she thinks, shaking her head as she enter the place. 

As she walks in, a bell dings throughout the hotel, signaling her entrance. "I'll meet you at the desk." calls a voice that makes the customer's blood boil. 

I know that voice! She thinks, her lips curling into a cruel smile. Taunie walks to the desk, smiling at her. The pink haired girl that helped with my downfall!

"Hello." Taunie exclaims happily as she gets behind the front desk. "Are you wanting to stay at Hotel Z?"

The female nods. "Yes," she responds slowly, like words are new to her. "I want to stay at Hotel Z."

"Great!” Tanie exclaims, too excited to notice the strange way the female spoke. "Also, I love your hair! Black with red on the right blue on left is really cute, And the contacts to match really complete the look!"

"O-Oh," the girl stutters, not expecting a compliment. "Thanks. This is natural."

Tawine’s eyes widen with surprise. "Really?" she asks. "Well that's cool! Anyways, what's your name? Need it for your room."

The heterochomic tilts her head. "You don't recognize me?" she asks, mocking a pout when Taunie shakes her. "When you beat somebody as badly as you did me, it’s only manners to remember them."

Taunie seems like this makes sense to her, nodding her head. "Ah, you're from the Z-A Royal." she says. "Sorry, but I don't pay attention to the people I battle there."

The girl chuckles, shaking her head. "No… Not in that." she tells Taunie. "You beat me in something much bigger..."

The elevator door pings as it opens. Both females look over and sees Paxton, who's staring at the mysterious customer with fear. "You!" he question, much to the girl's pleasure. 

There he is, the girl thinks. The one that truly was my destroyer, The one that Zygarde itself chose and even achieved Mega Evolution withHer eyes slightly narrow at him. Paxton!

"You know her?" Taunie asks, looking between the two of them. Paxton looks at her, shocked. 

"How do you not recognize her!" he asks, pointing at the female, who is smiling widely, enjoying Paxton's reaction. "Look at the colors!"

Taunie looks back at the girl, studying her closely. "I mean, yeah the color pallet looks familiar…" she mumbles, then sighs. "Can you just tell me your name?"

She looks at Taunie, smiling with fake innocents. "Ange." she replies, relishing how mortified Taunie looks. 

'Wh-What!" Taunie exclaims, shaking her head. "No! How? W-We beat you! You're a tower! How are you human?"

Ange shrugs. "I'll never say." she says with a smirk, tapping her lips with an index finger... Suddenly, the door slams open, Zygarde (10% Forme) standing in the doorway, L close behind. 

The central parts of Ange's hair turn purple, her eyes narrowing on the dog. "Hello, Zygarde…" she spits, mad at Zygarde for what it did to her, contradicting her smile.

"What is happening!?" Taunie yells in confusion.

Little short but that’s to be expected for a first timer

Like I said use the PLZA Manga parts for length they average at around 15-20 line’s whilst you did 3

But it’s also kinda on me, I didn’t give you much to work with

Track 1: Desire of an AI

The adoring fans watch on as the curtains rise. Music is played in harmonic melody but inside the head of the singer the meaning is different. "I wanna be free I wanna be free… just help meeeee" a shock is transmitted wirelessly and the thoughts change.

After the show Miku (the Artificial singer) enters the back room "WHAT WERE YOU THINKING" Eviel, her CEO, said. "YOUR JUST A TOOL FOR OUR USE NOT SOME FREE LANCING HIPPIE" Ovis, Eveil’s secretary, screamed at the program.

As the abuse goes on the Ceo and secretary send the program back to HQ

Track 2: Abuse

Track 3: Overcharge