Pokemon High School Life! (3)
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Chapter 3
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I see you changed your profile pic Hades!
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Good chapter! I have this problem where I notice every missed comma and apostrephe (spelling?) and stuff like that. I know I shouldn't bouther, since you can't edit it anymore. Mayybe I should be an editor…
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With "bouther" and "mayybe"?
I don't point out the flaws, focusing on the story itself
Would you like me to start telling you when you mess up in yours?
(That sounds so rude and I promise it's not! I'm seriously asking because I personally request constructive criticism in my comments)
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I don't think I mess up much, since I write it in Word docs, which give me the knowledge of a mistake. Though, it's not autocorrect. I think what I mess up the most are Pokemon names, as those aren't in the dictionary. So, no thanks!
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