Welcome to the official Pokémon Forums!

Click here to review our official Rules & Guidelines.
[Pokémon TCG Live] Maintenance Notice

Pokémon TCG Live will be offline for maintenance from 16:00 ~ 24:00 (UTC) on January 27, 2026.
Please see the Version 1.34.0 - Patch Notes for more information.

Time For Vol.4 of our Manga

1141142144146147149

Comments

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 8,912 ✭✭✭✭✭
    1,500 Agrees 1,500 Likes 5000 Comments 1,000 LOLs

    "Heading out," Naveen hollers as he goes to leave. Ange rushes to him.

    "Where are you going," she questions.

    "To Hotel Richissimi," he answers without looking back at her.

    "I've never been there. Can I come," Ange asks, already putting her hoodie on.

    "You won't take no for an answer, will you," Naveen says with a sigh. Ange shakes her head.

    "Nope," the heterochrom answers. Naveen sighs again, much more dramatically this time.

    "Fiiiiine," he groans. "Come on."

    "Yay," Ange exclaims, following him out the door.

    I don't have time to finish

    Sorry

    However, I'll do the next part in the morning

    It's the weekend so I should be fine

  • Joeybear7
    Joeybear7 Member Posts: 3,324 ✭✭✭✭✭
    2500 Comments 1,000 Likes 500 LOLs 500 Agrees

    I like how Navven says, Your not going to take no for an answer” the “No…”

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 8,912 ✭✭✭✭✭
    1,500 Agrees 1,500 Likes 5000 Comments 1,000 LOLs

    As Ange and Naveen approach the hotel, Ange gets shivers of dread. She doesn't know why, but Hotel Richissime makes her very uncomfortable. She suddenly regrets coming along. "W-Why are you here, exactly," she asks.

    "Because Jacinthe requested my presence," Naveen answers. "I've learned from watching others that bad things when you ignore her, so I just want to do this quickly so I can get out quickly."

    Sounds good to me, Ange thinks as they enter the building. Standing at the end of the hall in front of the elevator is a woman with a long green braid in a maid outfit. Ange can't explain it, but she gets a strong sense of depression from her.

    "Hello," the servant says with a small bow. "Lady Jacinthe will be pleased to see you made it."

    "Not like I had a choice," Naveen mutters. The woman doesn't seem to have heard this.

    "Lady Jacinthe is on the second floor," the green haired person states. "Please go on up."

    "And what do I do," Ange asks. The woman looks at her with surprise, noticing her for the first time.

    "Um… We weren't expecting you..." the maid thinks for a second. "Naveen. Please tell Lady Jacinthe that I'll be down here with an... unexpected guest."

    "Okay," the boy responds with a shrug, going up the elevator. The woman looks at the heterochrom.

    "Would you like to take a seat," she asks with a small bow.

    So the next part will be Ange and her talking, where Ange will discover what's going on, then match up to Jacinthe and challenge her for LeBanne's freedom

    Then the part after that is the battle

    I should get the conversation done today

  • Thur55555555555
    Thur55555555555 Member Posts: 3,754 ✭✭✭✭✭
    1,500 LOLs 1,500 Likes 1,000 Agrees 2500 Comments
  • Joeybear7
    Joeybear7 Member Posts: 3,324 ✭✭✭✭✭
    2500 Comments 1,000 Likes 500 LOLs 500 Agrees

    @Hades0918 whats your progress

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 8,912 ✭✭✭✭✭
    1,500 Agrees 1,500 Likes 5000 Comments 1,000 LOLs
  • Joeybear7
    Joeybear7 Member Posts: 3,324 ✭✭✭✭✭
    2500 Comments 1,000 Likes 500 LOLs 500 Agrees

    @Hades0918 whats your progress

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 8,912 ✭✭✭✭✭
    1,500 Agrees 1,500 Likes 5000 Comments 1,000 LOLs

    (Apology quick. These are being shorter than usual. I'm trying to lengthen it, but most of these events don't take much for some reason)

    Ange takes a seat at a nearby table. The woman stands there a bit awkwardly. "You gonna sit with me or what," the heterochrome questions. The maid looks surprised.

    "Wait. You want m-me to sit with you," she asks, genuinely shocked.

    "I mean, yeah," Ange answers. "What else would you do? Stand there the whole time silently?"

    "Well, yes," the maid responds. "That's what usually happens…"

    The green haired lady takes a seat with a groan. "What's your name," Ange asks. The woman looks further surprised by this question.

    "Wow… You're different than most…" she mutters, going quiet for a bit. She then remembers that there is a question. "Oh, right. It's LeBanne."

    "I'm Ange," the girl tells her. LeBanne's eyes narrow briefly, but she doesn't say anything. "So… you're maid. Is that fun?"

    LeBanne looks around before sighing. "You want the truth, kid," she asks in a low tone, her entire voice changing. "It wasn't my choice."

    Ange is shocked by both the change and revelation. "Then why are you doing it."

    "It's a long story, but to keep it simple I was a proud and mighty battler but then Jacinthe came along," the maid explains. Ange leans in, listening closely "She challenged me to a battle. I thought she was crazy, ya know? A dainty lady challenging me? I was arrogant and talked big noise, saying I could beat her easily. She said if I'm so sure, then I'd have no problem agreeing that if I lost I'd be her servant. Of course I agreed. I lost and here we are."

    The two of them sit silently for a bit as Ange processes the story. "Okay, that is your fault," she mutters. "But have you been given a chance to be free?"

    LeBanne shakes her head. "I've tried. Trust me. But she won't accept."

    This angers the heterochrome, causing her to shoot up to her feet. "So you're stuck in eternal servitude," she asks, but it's more of a statement. LeBanne nods, only fueling Ange's rage. "THAT'S NO DIFFERENT THAN BEING A POKEMON!"

    Ange storms over to the elevator, smashing the up button. "What're you doin'," the servant questions.

    "I'm gonna give this jerk a piece of my mind!"

  • Joeybear7
    Joeybear7 Member Posts: 3,324 ✭✭✭✭✭
    2500 Comments 1,000 Likes 500 LOLs 500 Agrees

    …Jacinthe’s in BOILING hot water, also it’s ok if you want to space out mega parts