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Chapter 1: Chance to be a Hero

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Joeybear7 Member Posts: 3,439 ✭✭✭✭✭

January 20 #22

https://community.pokemon.com/en-us/discussion/comment/120337#Comment_120337

good, just tad me when that happens

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Hades0918 Member Posts: 9,230 ✭✭✭✭✭

January 20 #23

https://community.pokemon.com/en-us/discussion/comment/120331#Comment_120331

I'm planning to make the next chapter soon
It is my third favorite I'm writing
The issue is that I don't have much plot planned after chapter 5-ish, so I'm reluctant to write more, causing slow updates

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UnovanZorua Member Posts: 4,065 ✭✭✭✭✭

January 20 edited January 20 #24

I've noticed you make characters say y'all a lot in your stories (I don't mean this in a negative way, it's just interesting and I felt like pointing it out)

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Thur55555555555 Member Posts: 3,863 ✭✭✭✭✭

January 20 #25

https://community.pokemon.com/en-us/discussion/comment/120343#Comment_120343

Yeah, I like it a lot too, having the characters rather than a narrator explain it is really cool. I noticed as I was reading through another book the same thing and I have played with it in my own writing and I like it.

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Hades0918 Member Posts: 9,230 ✭✭✭✭✭

January 20 #26

https://community.pokemon.com/en-us/discussion/comment/120343#Comment_120343

Well, I don't know what else to say
I try to use other terms
Trust me, I do, but it's really the only one I know
Also, I didn't take it offensively
I know I do and you just made an observation
https://community.pokemon.com/en-us/discussion/comment/120344#Comment_120344

Can you explain this to me?
What's interesting?
(It may just be me, but I don't see how this relates to "y'all")

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Hades0918 Member Posts: 9,230 ✭✭✭✭✭

January 20 #27

I mean, I could say "you two" but that just sounds weird (in my opinion)

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Thur55555555555 Member Posts: 3,863 ✭✭✭✭✭

January 20 #28

https://community.pokemon.com/en-us/discussion/comment/120352#Comment_120352

Both of you.

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Thur55555555555 Member Posts: 3,863 ✭✭✭✭✭

January 20 #29

https://community.pokemon.com/en-us/discussion/comment/120351#Comment_120351

This isn’t about y’all it’s about your style and I like it.

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Hades0918 Member Posts: 9,230 ✭✭✭✭✭

January 20 #30

https://community.pokemon.com/en-us/discussion/comment/120360#Comment_120360

Oh
I'm glad to hear you like my writing style!
I think that's what that means...
https://community.pokemon.com/en-us/discussion/comment/120359#Comment_120359

...
How have I never thought of that?

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Thur55555555555 Member Posts: 3,863 ✭✭✭✭✭

January 20 edited January 20 #31

https://community.pokemon.com/en-us/discussion/comment/120364#Comment_120364

Yes that is what it means.
Also friends pair or duo could be used (might wana wait on friends).

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