Alola Story Chapter 5 (part4)
(this story draws inspiration from one in IRC)
Akala island
MC travels where they shouldn't before ghost trial and catches fun[dun dun dun] ice type
I have no idea how to get back to that balloon signaling the PMC. Where can I catch my breathe? I need sandwich. I smell salty air. Wait let out Dartrix. Dartrix led the way to shores. Get on parents' Pokemon to surf. Meet a funny guy looking for a person or Pokemon to tickle his Starmie. I should get going. Through some trees there's a field. Some trainers are moving slowly carefully so I just stayed on the path because it's best to avoid a battle here.
A Pokemon hopped out of the tall grass! I flip out my trusty Dex to see what it is.
Pkmn Joey sense out Garchomp! Over the hill on the other side on the path our protagonist walks unknowingly of the dangers. Doing what Izzy saw on TV. Runs the path into the Pikachu with a hat on. The Dex chirps,"It is Pikachu!" While sleeping, it generates electricity in the sacs in its cheeks. If it’s not getting enough sleep, it will be able to use only weak electricity ... But this one wasn't sleeping.
I sent out the Sliggo and it's shell started sparking. Pikachu started slowly hopping toward my Sliggo. The wind had picked up. It was swirling around Pikachu and Sliggo used Takedown instinctively. Pikachu was knocked back. And I recalled Sliggo and dropped a Poké Doll. Dartrix let out a hoot and I chuckled. "You need to find a home."
Somewhere a Pikachu's cheeks are getting lighter. More yellow. More electricity is being charged in them. Izzy senses something.
Dartrix starts evolving.
Dun-dun-dun-dun-dun-dun-dun DUN DUN DUN
Pikachu jumps from the bush and my hair stands up. Before I get to shout,"Decidueye use Spirit Shackle." I look intently at Pikachu and arrows with chains appear around it. With a purple glow.
I stand flabbergasted. The fight seemed to be over before it started.
I kneel down and spray Pikachu. And walk off into the sunset with my Decidueye.
Comments
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I cantt find the first three parts
Can you tag me in them?
Anyways, I enjoyed this!
I like that her Pokémon know what she wants before she does lol
You were supposed to write the next trial, though
I'm not saying that because I'm upset or anything
I wanted to ask do you still want to write it?
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Would you like to rewrite this?
I'm not saying it is bad and you need to!
I promise!
I just know you felt rushed and so I didn't know if you rushed through it ans didn't get everything you wanted in
I have no problem letting you redo it and still get your part b
Or, if you're happy with this one, you can leave it as is
Completely up to you, just wanted to offer
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W story, helping the (probably shiny) Pikachu
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