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my pmd comic idea

clasingla
clasingla Member Posts: 6,560 ✭✭✭✭✭
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I don't think that my art skills are good enough to do it so I'm just going to explain everything that i had planned for this so at least so that i can look back to it if i ever want to actually make the comic

prologue,

it all starts with a legend, a corrupt xerneas tries to engulf the world with white void to be dictator and ruler over it. 8 heroes rise up, celebi, terrakion, victini, hoopa, latios, shaymin, lunala, and zygarde seal xerneas powers freeing all those who she captured but it came at a cost, there forms turned into these silver amulets and spread across the land 2 to a different dimension not to be found for 3 millenia

arc 1 - the blinding chaos

it starts off with shock a plusle wearing a brown leather jacket and a silver thunderbolt amulet with a half locket in the coat pocket running on the rooftops of a nearby village being chased of a rescue team of salandit spoink and natu making a joke about bravado with vibrava when jumping to a vibrava later he goes to an alley where he meets a vileplume and gives them money he stole from the guild which was a trick to capture shock and bring him to court shock is a vigilante comparable to robin hood he vowed to take the quest forgotten thrown away by guild members and if a loved one was lost in a dungeon goes and recompensates for the family who is afflicted. back to the main point he is then taken to court where he is judged by judge lickilicky called judge lickidilly and guildmaster swawmpert and eventually the court decides that his punishment should be having to join the guild (probably the thing that shock wanted the least) and is forced to join a team of a mudkip named marshall and a cleffa named with a amulet with a circle with swirls inside the mudkip is a jerk to shock and treats him like he's not a pokemon because marshall believes all criminals are bad and deserve no redemption this is when they decided to take a request to find an artifact this transition to swampert talking about something that happened where shock once rescued his nephew when no one else did and thats why they decided on what they decided on. on there way they enocunter a small house and inside they meet none other than willy or as he likes to call himself WOOPAH DA INQUISITAH and he has a compass which the group needed since they needed to go north turns out this is just a gag and the compass actually points west cause W stands for Wooper they latter encounter a shiny riolu named ryan with a black and red band on their hand who starts to attack them (or more specifically wooper) the group is able to beat ryan and he escapes away after that which made the group stay a bit longer to rest during this point in time marshall catches shock writing something about an ellie and regrets relating to her and as the stubborn idiot he is immedietly uses that to start a fight between the two shock degerading the guild whos marshalls father owns while mudkip keeps egging him on about ellie causing the necklace around stella to glow and glue starts pouring out from these holes stella looks different like she is a combination of a hoopa and cleffa wooper walks in and then immedietly walks back out and say i'll just fade into the void next they have to walk in the desert for a bit and get seperated in a cave and marshall almost falls to his demise if not to be saved by shock ironically which makes marshall question his original thoughts after they reunite they are in a foresty area with a starry sky and shock starts looking up a few tears drip down his face a memory starts to play where its him and a minun names ellie sitting together looking at the stars ellie talks about wanting to go adventuring and joining the guild and for shock to join her, he said that he would ellie decided to go in a dungeon after a few days he put a rescue request to have someone recue quest it was ignored for a day, a week, 3 weeks before he decided to go inside and look for her himself, he couldn't find her and came trotting back to the village defeated only to find it in complete ruins his master gone and all he could find was an amulet on the ground that day forward he vowed to make sure no one had to feel the pain he did. after going in the forest willy thinks they should split up for the entrance marshall and stella together and willy and shock together willy leads shock into these ruins there lying there tired out is ryan he tells shock to get out of there but its too late willy gives a whistle and starts laughing manically explains his dasteredly plan and introduces himself as WOOPAH DA TORTURAH and commands the shadow creatures with a secret communication using their eyes to attack. shocks locket falls out of his jacket into the ventilation where a group of pokemon (which ellie is in see its ellie sees it and then sees shock being sucked into the amulet ) she rushes out and jumps to save shock giving shock enough hope and power to become an ultimate form a combiniation of him and latios able to beat all the void servants willy then sneaks off to stella and marshall and explain that shock wanted to search by himself and he'll help them and have an idea of where to go. meanwhile shock is taking back to yveltals base and ellie explains her side of the story of being rescued from void creatures because of yveltals group and decided to join them and tells that yveltal goal is to prevent xerneas from getting any of the amulets and to stop xerneas once and for all shock remember that Stella has a necklace and mentions they got to go save her so he embarks to save Stella and Marshall meanwhile Willy is leading Stella and Marshall straight to xerneas once there he says this is the final destination your end is now time for you to fade into the void and sends void hands engulfing Marshall this starts to make Stella go off and start to fade tho is saved by shock in time that basically sums up arc 1

I’ll explain arc 2 3 4 5 6 and 7 later

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  • clasingla
    clasingla Member Posts: 6,560 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    also this is just a summary not an actual story

  • clasingla
    clasingla Member Posts: 6,560 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    should I explain arc 2-7 in this post or in a separate post

  • Hades0918
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  • clasingla
    clasingla Member Posts: 6,560 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    edited March 5 #5

    also sorry for it being hard to read

  • clasingla
    clasingla Member Posts: 6,560 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    arc 2 - refractured time

    this arc starts off with xerneas attacking a village and you see a meowstic named meowlin with an amulet go back in time a few minutes and then beg xerneas to not send serene to the void again (cuz he time traveling) xerneas agrees having meowlin trapped inside the amulet. she then commands a pinser to go grab serene and yeet her after having the move soak used on her to get rid of her psychic type.

    after that we get to see inside the amulet meowlin absolutely freaks out since he is trapped inside with celebi by the way celebi is chill and basically confirms that they are trapped in there.

    cut to the human world. there is this girl who is out at a walk in the park and finds this necklace on the ground they pick it up and then they Get teleported and turned into a Pokemon and end up somewhere strange on the ground

    serene gets up serene is a espurr with heterochromia with a green eye and a purple eye she is soon found by a dolliv who takes her to yveltal but serene is very shy and doesn't really talk a lot. she is so focused on what is getting what was taken from her brother she needs to hold on to his memory (she think he dead).

    elsewhere in the stormy oasis (lightning strikes from the ground instead of the sky) a zeraora named zero is being chased by a bunch of stallers (a subclass of xerneas's subsidiaries) then something stops them from chasing them when he looks he sees an amaura on the ground. he goes to protect the amaura but that amaura is still overstimulated from what just happened still processing 1st being attacked and becoming a freaking Pokemon.

    so the human turned amaura amity teleports to a random dimension with zero who is now frightened cause now he has no idea what the heck is going on they teleport back to the Pokemon Mystery dungeon world and then we transition back to serene.

    serene is now at xerneas cave here to get the amulet back. after sneaking in grabs the amulet and then xerneas troops try to ambush her using time glimpses she is able to see how there about to attack and avoid them though it takes her a long time to be able to run away she has no way to get back to rather the decimated village or yveltals.

    back to amaura and zero it turns out zero is kind of a sloth and pretty lazy with a carefree personality and such. and basically a conversation between zero and amity happening they stumble upon serene who is completely lost at this point.

    they go travel in a forest and amity and zero have a chat after zero punches a tree with his fist charing the tree in a cool way also breaking it. zero wants to explain how he fail but at the end of the day he just shrugged it off and said its best not to dwell on the past.

    after a while they reach serene's village why amity and zero have another chat serene has the most cutest moment ever she goes to two gravestones which are her parents and puts flowers to them and then takes her brothers broken glasses repairs them the best she can (which is mostly going to be duct tape and glue. roll up a stone and put his name on it leaving the glasses and a flower below to remember him and she starts to cry.

    serene then tries to show them the way but zeraora is not letting them acting nervous for some reason. they will then be ambushed by some of xerneas troops and they run off and zeraora takes em to a place a shrine of some sorts. upon closer inspection it is for zeraora. zeraora looks ancy and like he is hiding something. he then finally explains why he acts this way.

    3000 years ago 10 powerful Pokemon had a plan to forever seal the villain xerneas the 8 mentioned as in the prologue + zeraora and yveltal they were going to the meeting place when they got ambushed zeraora with his carefree atitude was like yveltal you can probably handle them see you in a bit chump or something of that sort which led to yveltal getting consumed by void and him running off till it was all over. he then was disgraced by all the legnedarys and cast off banished to the stormy oasis and yveltal holds a grudge against him for that.

    I think afterword they make their way back to yveltal and stuff like that

  • clasingla
    clasingla Member Posts: 6,560 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    also what do you think of the story I had planned so far

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 12,149 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    I'm not able to fully read it but I have it bookmarked

    I'll let you know later

  • Hades0918
    Hades0918 Member Posts: 12,149 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    I'm liking it!

    Plot is great and I like Shock

  • UnovanZorua
    UnovanZorua Member Posts: 4,432 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    It's good!

  • clasingla
    clasingla Member Posts: 6,560 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    arc 3 - weak thorns

    it starts with a flashback with a posh eevee family that has an abusive mother who's an espeoen the two youngest both eevee's want to go away and the older one promises to take the younger one with it. after the older one sneaks off to buy a thunder stone (way against their mother's standard who want them all to be espeon) they get an amulet for their sister. when the mother finds out he gets completely disowned and beaten up pretty badly and runs off leaving the sister to grow up in that putrid household.

    the sister made friends with a nacli (there both kind of insane) the nacli felt like the world is out to get them and decided to join xerneas troops and planned an attack to send the town eevee is in to the void and escape w/ eevee. after finding out that xerneas wants to hunt specifically the only person who was decent to them because of the amulet they switch sides and find a skitty working for yveltal and command him to take them there. the poor skitty is definitely traumitized the whole way there.

    after getting to yveltal's its found out that the eevee's brother thats now a jolteon turned out to join yveltal and left her with her awful mother and makes thorns with her amulet powers to escape away and runs off. jolteon, skitty, and nacli (after the salt gets purified) are sent out to find the eevee

    the eevee then meets up with the other amulet holder of this ark elgyem and his friend togedemaru elgyem and togedemaru come from this merchant tribe who were wiped out from the tsunami (xerneas strongest force) elgyem is a kind smart but very weak pokemon he can't even use his psychic powers to lift a pebble off the ground. togedemaru is very nerdy wears glasses and such also very shy. eevee is pretty rude to them and only accompanies them cause they were searching for uxie at lake endurance to be able to learn how to stop xerneas forces.

    after getting closer to the mountain eevee said she doesn't need their help anymore. eevee enters a place full of mist a voice laughs mocks eevee. a vaporeon part of the same lineage as the espeon one who sided with xerneas one's who's goal is clear, end the lineage. he reveals the weakness of eevee making her transform into her fusion like form being scared and weak and almost about to fade into the necklace like meowlin did until elgyem also turns into his amulet form (terrakion also he doesn't like seeing people hurt) and psychically chucks a giant boulder at vaporeon. after this eevee runs into a cave.

    elgyem follows to see eevee (one who acts to tough for their own good btw) crying. eevee admits to being vunerable and scared of being seen as week. scared that others will treat her like a nobody like she has always been treated like by her mom. but she is still tries to hide her weakness tho. and eevee still has quite a while to learn how to improve but now is actually trying to be better tho still scowls, death glares and stuff some of the time.

    when they reach lake endurance it turned out to be the home of azelf instead who warns them that they should leave or else the stallers (a group of xerneas troop who keep legendaries and mythicals trapped in a certain mystery dungeon) will track them down so they run off after fighting some of the stallers off. they are eventually found by the group searching for them and the rest of the story is just the treck back.