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Let’s make Vol.3 Of our manga

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  • Hades0918
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  • Hades0918
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    Busy

    Haven't started

    I know how it will go, though!

    It will be easy to write since I have it planned

  • Joeybear7
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    ok good! I’m expecting by end of night then? If not then tomorrow morning

  • Hades0918
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    Paxton looks around at the Beedrills. There's at least fifty of them, and none of them look happy. "Let's go," he shouts, tossing Charizard's PokeBall. It pops out, roaring at the swarm. The Beedrills charge in, stingers poised to strike.

    "Flamethrower, quick. Then turn and use Air Slash," Paxton commands. Charizard takes a short breath, unleashing flames with the exhale. It takes out some of the ones in front of it, the others backing away from the flames. Charizard then turns around, immediately giving its wings a powerful flap, sending blades of wind at the army behind it. Some of the Beedrills fall, but most of them swerve around it.

    Paxton groan. "Alright, Flamethrower," he tells it. Charizard opens its mouth, a stream of fire shooting out. While yes it got the targets, the ones behind it take the opportunity to come back, hitting Charizard with Poison Sting. The lizard howls in agony.

    "Are you okay," Paxton asks, getting a small bit of relief when Charizard nods. "Great! Hurricane," he says. Charizard waits until the Beedrills group back together before pushing its wings out, summoning a giant gust of wind that hits all the Beedrills in front of it. They buzz angrily as they smash into the wall, falling to the ground.

    The Shiny Alpha Pumpkaboo sees an escape where the fallen Beedrill lie and moves quick to it. It's in such a rush, though, that it doesn't notice the incoming Beedrill. Paxton sees it, though. "Look out," he shouts, leaping off the ground and tackling it, barely not getting hit by the bug himself. Pumpkaboo looks at him with admiration, but then remembers it's difference and escapes his grasp, taking off again.

    "Wait," Paxton shouts. It turns to look at him and sees a Beedrill he does not. In a panic to save Paxton, it unleashes Willow Wisp. Paxton yelps, ducking his head. At first he's offended, thinking that was for him. But then he hears a buzz of anger and turns around, realizing that Pumpkaboo stopped the Beedrill from getting him.

    "Hey. than-" he turns back to it with a smile, but then sees that it's already gone. He wants to chase it, but when he turns back to Charizard, he sees that it is barely holding its own. He sighs, pushing himself off the ground. "We're gonna need more power to get out of this," he says, holding up his wrist, his Key Stone bracelet shining brightly.

    Charizard nods, its Mega Stone shining back. Threads of energy comes off their stones, attaching to each other. Charizard's body lights up as it fills with power. Its wings become shredded and flames burst from its mouth. When the light disburses, Mega Charizard X stands in the field, glaring at the Beedrill.

    "Let's go," Paxton hollers. "Fire Blast!"

    So next we're going to time skip to Paxton and Charizard standing in the center of all the unconscious Beedrills

    There's that part

    I aim to get more done tomorrow

  • Joeybear7
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    edited November 29 #120

    I love the mental image of a Mega Charizard X in the center of 50+ dead Beedrill, also good job as always

    Escaping Wild Zone 15:

    A Shiny Alpha Pumpkaboo floats through Wild Zone 15, its red eyes glowing as it looks at the other Pumpkaboos, which all drift away as it passes. It's used to it, though. Every night, when everyone comes out, this one gets avoided. Why? Because it's different. 

    No other Pumpkaboo even tries to get to know it. They just avoid it. You would think it's fine this treatment by now. It's been this way since it was born. But it still hurts.

    The Shiny Alpha Pumpkaboo is staring at the gate with the 15 on it. The one that blocks it from exploring the world outside. Trainers come in and out, most defeated by the army of Ghost types that live in this small area. Tonight is one of the nights that happens. 

    It watches, it's red eyes looking for any chance of opportunity as the panicked trainer runs out the Wild Zone 15 to heal their Pokémon. Shiny Alpha Pumpkaboo watches with excitement as the green barrier glitches. None of the other Pokémon notice. This is its chance. 

    It rushes for the Wild Zone 15 gate and it narrowly makes it out right as the gate fixes itself, It looks around in awe as it sees everything the confinement kept from it. This is the start of a new & better life!

    Rouge Mega Lucario:

    "Heat Crash," Taunie commands, rolling as a Dragon Pulse gets blasted at her.

    "Join it with Superpower," Paxton shouts, barely spinning out of the way as an Aura Sphere shoots by him.

    Mega Emboar covers itself in flames as it leaps into the air, slamming down into the Rouge Mega Lucario. At the same time, Mega Feraligatr smashes its tail into the Lucario, the two hits causing it to stumble. The Rouge Mega Lucario regains its footing quickly, though, howling with so much power it knock Taunie's and Paxton's Pokémon. Its eyes then lock onto Mega Emboar as it kicks off the ground, its aura forming into a bone as it uses Bone Rush on Emboar. Nobody has time to react as it strikes burning pig with a flurry of strikes. There's a blinding flash as Emboar collapses, its Mega Evolution disappearing.

    "That was my last Pokémon," Taunie shouts as she returns it, pocketing her PokeBall. "It's all up to you!"

    Paxton nods with a grunt. Mega Feraligatr, his own last Pokémon, growls at the Rouge Mega Lucario, which just glares back. It's all up to me, he thinks to himself, clenching his fists tightly. I have to save it!

    Lucario dashes forward, hitting Mega Feraligatr with Extreme Speed before Paxton can counter. Feraligatr gets pushed back but doesn't fall. "You good," Paxton asks. Feraligatr nods and growls. "Good. Liquidation!"

    Mega Feraligatr leaps at the Rouge Mega, claws covered in water. As it slashes, the Lucario tries to side step but Feraligatr extends its reach, catching the Lucario and continuing to slam its sharp claws into it, water splashing around as it does.

    "Nice hit," Taunie cheers, giving them a thumbs up. Paxton returns it with a smile, then turning his attention back to the battle. The Lucario escapes Feraligatr's onslaught and fires a Dragon Pulse, which is super effective. Mega Feraligatr howls in agony as it gets sent soaring through the air. 

    "Hang there," Paxton hollers as Feraligatr struggles to its feet. It grunts as it fully stands up again, a pained expression on its face. Mega Feraligatr shakes it head, then roaring challengingly at the Rouge Mega Lucario. The dog claps its fists together. As it separates them, a blue orb of energy is in its paws. It pushes out its arms, launching the ball at the alligator. 

    "Outrage," Paxton yells, throwing his fist out. Mega Feraligatr's eyes narrow as it howls, the red skin clamping over it as it pushes its arms out in front of it, creating a fake head. It charges through the Aura Sphere, taking the hit and keeps going towards the Lucario, which braces itself for impact. Feraligatr leaps into the air, spreading its arms and uncovering its head. It dives down, clawing, slashing, and biting the Rouge Mega Lucario, which tries to block the hits but can't handle the attacks. Lucario howls as Mega Feraligatr hits it with the final strike, its Mega Power bursting off of it, forming into a Lucarionite, which Taunie catches.

    Lucario lies on the ground, groaning with pain. Taunie walks up to it cautiously. "You okay," she asks gently, helping Lucario sit. It barks softly, nodding. Taunie smiles. "Good." It then grabs one of Tauine’s Pokéballs and Catches itself, it then emerges smiling 

    Paxton smiles as he watches Taunie help Lucario to its feet. Glad I could do it, he thinks to himself. I would hate it if I couldn't save it.

    Paxton goes to help Taunie support Lucario, but a noise behind him catches his attention. He turns around, meeting the glowing red eye of a Shiny Alpha Pumpkaboo. It looks scared as he notices it. Paxton smiles at it. "Hey, fella! Wha-"

    The Pumpkaboo squeaks with fear, floating away quickly, which is odd because it’s an alpha. “What were you saying," Taunie asks. He turns around and sees her looking at him with confusion. He laughs awkwardly.

    "Oh, it's nothing. I'll meet you at the hotel later," he says, running in the direction the Pumpkaboo went. "I'll meet with you later," he hollers over his shoulder.

    "Uh, okay," Taunie responds, watching him run off. She can't worry about that right now, though. She turns her attention back to Lucario. "Let's get you to a Pokémon Center," she tells it with a small smile. It smiles back, nodding.

    Chase Time:

    Paxton runs through the street, looking around frantically. He just saw the Pumpkaboo over here! “Where'd it go?” He hears a clatter come from some trash cans nearby. Paxton goes over to the sound and finds the Shiny Alpha Pumpkaboo, it's red eyes looking up at him with fear.

    "There you are," Paxton exclaims, reaching out for it. Pumpkaboo backs away quickly, bumping into the wall. "You don't have to be scared," he tells it gently, continuing to reach for it. "Earlier it looked like you wanted something. Need some help?"

    Paxton is just about to grab it, but the Shiny Alpha Pumpkaboo runs, wailing loudly. Paxton groans, chasing after it again. He was so close to helping it! Pumpkaboo turns the corner, Paxton right behind. However, when Paxton makes it around, the Pumpkaboo is gone. Paxton looks around, but the only thing he can find is a Holovator.

    Pokémon can't use those, he thinks, looking at the yellow arrows. Can they?

    He figures it's worth a shot, he steps onto it. His body dematerializes briefly, reforming at the top. He steps off and scans the roofs. He gasps, seeing the Shiny Alpha Pumpkaboo three houses down. "Wait up," he hollers at it, sprinting to the next building. It turns to Paxton, red eyes wide. It floats away quicker, much to his annoyance.

    They leap from rooftop to rooftop, Paxton slowly catching up. Paxton is one building behind it. The Shiny Alpha Pumpkaboo turns around, now floating backwards, watching Paxton with fear as it runs. However, because it wasn't looking in front of it, it couldn't see the flock of incoming Pidgey. "Look out," Paxton yells at it. It looks, but it's too late. 

    The flock crashes into Pumpkaboo, knocking it back and causing it to fall in between the gap of the buildings. "I've got you," Paxton shouts, lunging after it. He dives between into the gap, reaching out and grabbing the panicked Pumpkaboo. He then pulls it against him, flipping where his back is facing the ground. He shields Pumpkaboo as they crash into a tree, Paxton taking the majority of the hit.

    He groans as he sits up, rubbing his sore spots. "You alright," he asks. The Shiny Alpha looks at him, it's red eyes filled with admiration. Then, its self-consciousness kicks in. It turns to flee, but stops when it sees a bunch of Kakuna. They were in the tree Paxton and the Pumkaboo crashed into, and they're all grumbling, agitated.

    "Don't worry," Paxton says, getting up and brushing himself off. "They're just Kakuna. Can't really attack well." As if in response to that, all the Kakunas light up, the shells splitting open and Beedrill popping out. Their eyes lock onto the two that disturbed their peace.

    "Well that's not good," Paxton says, grabbing his Charizard's PokeBall. "Beedrill attack really well!"

    Beedrill Brawl:

    Paxton looks around at the Beedrills. There's at least fifty of them, and none of them look happy. "Let's go," he shouts, tossing Charizard's PokeBall. It pops out, roaring at the swarm. The Beedrills charge in, stingers poised to strike. 

    "Flamethrower, quick. Then turn and use Air Slash," Paxton commands. Charizard takes a short breath, unleashing flames with the exhale. It takes out some of the ones in front of it, the others backing away from the flames. Charizard then turns around, immediately giving its wings a powerful flap, sending blades of wind at the army behind it. Some of the Beedrills fall, but most of them swerve around it.

    Paxton groan. "Alright, Flamethrower," he tells it. Charizard opens its mouth, a stream of fire shooting out. While yes it got the targets, the ones behind it take the opportunity to come back, hitting Charizard with Poison Sting. The lizard howls in agony.

    "Are you okay," Paxton asks, getting a small bit of relief when Charizard nods. "Great! Hurricane," he says. Charizard waits until the Beedrills group back together before pushing its wings out, summoning a giant gust of wind that hits all the Beedrills in front of it. They buzz angrily as they smash into the wall, falling to the ground.

    The Shiny Alpha Pumpkaboo sees an escape where the fallen Beedrill lie and moves quick to it. It's in such a rush, though, that it doesn't notice the incoming Beedrill. Paxton sees it, though. "Look out," he shouts, leaping off the ground and tackling it, barely not getting hit by the bug himself. Pumpkaboo looks at him with admiration, but then remembers it's difference and escapes his grasp, taking off again.

    "Wait," Paxton shouts. It turns to look at him and sees a Beedrill he does not. In a panic to save Paxton, it unleashes Willow Wisp. Paxton yelps, ducking his head. At first he's offended, thinking that was for him. But then he hears a buzz of anger and turns around, realizing that Pumpkaboo stopped the Beedrill from getting him.

    "Hey. than-" he turns back to it with a smile, but then sees that it's already gone. He wants to chase it, but when he turns back to Charizard, he sees that it is barely holding its own. He sighs, pushing himself off the ground. "We're gonna need more power to get out of this," he says, holding up his wrist, his Key Stone bracelet shining brightly.

    Charizard nods, its Mega Stone shining back. Threads of energy comes off their stones, attaching to each other. Charizard's body lights up as it fills with power. Its wings become shredded and flames burst from its mouth. When the light disburses, Mega Charizard X stands in the field, glaring at the Beedrill.

    "Let's go," Paxton hollers. "Fire Blast!"

  • Hades0918
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    It looks good all together!

    And you're right

    It is wonderful to picture