Let’s make a Romantic Manga

Joeybear7 · November 10

https://community.pokemon.com/en-us/discussion/comment/100859#Comment_100859

freestyle it

Joeybear7 · November 10

https://community.pokemon.com/en-us/discussion/comment/100895#Comment_100895

or you can ask for others for ideas. I don’t t have any ideas, I have autlsm and AÐHD so I just had a spark for the manga

UnovanZorua · November 10

You can say Autism and ADHD here, no need to censor it.

Hades0918 · November 10

So I'll make an outline, people can give some pointers, and then I'll write it

I want to remind you that I'm not all that into romance, so I'm not that experienced in the genre

I'll try my best, though!

Also, I'm keeping it kid-friendly

Hades0918 · November 11

I don't know how to incorporate Korrina and Ansha since Korrina has probably changed since X and Y and we don't even know Ansha yet.

The beginning:

The MZ Team just finished defeating another Rouge Mega and it was one of the most difficult yet. They decide to celebrate their victory. Taunie suggests Croissant Curry, but Naveen immediately turns it down, suggesting they switch things up and go out for some ice cream. Lida and Paxton say they're happy either way, and Taunie goes ahead and agrees to ice cream. As usual, Taunie says her and Paxton with catch up. The sun is setting in the sky, causing a rainbow of colors (I know it's manga and won't show colors, but I can in writing!). Taunie's eyes sparkle as she looks at Paxton. He leans in slightly. She leans, too. They close their eyes. I don't know if we say they kissed or leave it for assumption like in the X and Y anime with Serena and Ash.

The middle:

A week passes. Paxton comes down from his room and once in the lounge Taunie hugs him. It will say how Taunie has been much more clingy since that night and Paxton knows why but neither of them has talked about it. Well, that's actually what Taunie is about to say. She let's go of him and says "I think it's time we-" She gets cut off by Lida walking in and says she'll finish later. Lida goes and plops down in one of the chairs, asking what the plans are for that day. Paxton is about to suggest they get Naveen and go get some coffee but Taunie gets a call. So I don't know if she's calling because Vinnie is out of town and she's now reporting the Rouge Mega Evolutions until he's back or if it's because Vinnie is (dramatic pause) missing. If it is because Vinnie is out of town then that means there is a Rouge Mega for the team to stop. If Vinnie is missing then she needs help finding him, which would mean Emma comes into the story. No matter what they call Naveen and hold a strategy meeting.

Rouge Mega:

They're sitting in the room and determining who goes where. There is a Mega Dragonite, Mega Charizard X, and Mega Falinks. Lida goes to Dragonite, Naveen goes Charizard, and Taunie Falinks. As always, Paxton goes to all. I'll obviously have to write about the Dragonite and Charizard battle, but since we're focusing on Taunie and Paxton I'll skip there in this outline. After beating the Falinks, they call Lida and Naveen and tell them they won and will be back at Hotel Z soon. Once off the phone, she finishes what she wanted to talk about. She says she the kiss got her thinking and she wants more than a friendship. Paxton agrees and they set up a coffee date for the next day.

Missing Vinnie:

So they're talking about it at the table and Emma is sitting there, too. Paxton called Emma while Taunie called Naveen and Lida got the room set up. The five of them are discussing what might have happened to Vinnie. Emma says not to assume he was "eliminated" (keeping it kid-friendly) and think this is just either a kidnapping or he left. They have Jett on the phone, talking about his latest jobs and his favorite places. They create a list and decide they will split into groups. Emma will go solo and search his favorite cafe. Lida and Naveen will meet up with Jett and search his recent job locations. Paxton and Taunie will ask people Vinnie has met up with lately. I'll figure all that out once actually doing it, but as they go to meet up with one of the people, Taunie decides to talk about what she started earlier. Same as above, they want to develop their relationship into something romantic and plan to go on a date. As they finish their talk, Emma calls them. She had been following leads all day and found him at a relative's house. Something major happened and he had to rush there without time to alert anyone.

Ending:

It ends with the coffee date. I don't really have any special idea or description. It just has them talking, holding hands, and possibly ends with either explicit or suggested kiss.

Any input or advice is welcome. Romance is not my strong suit.