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Mystery dungeon story 3 prologue

clasingla
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though i haven't continued mystery dungeon story 2 and im still at the very beginning my creative brain can't just create a middle and an end or even what happens next after the next chapter sooooooooooooo Im just going to write a prologue for the next one also its been half a year since i wrote the last one so i will be rusty

Prologue - The Fate of the Broken

Gabe felt the wind blowing across the field he was crossing. His fir was dirty, in usual circumstances that would be disgraceful but not currently. He has been walking for days crossing through many mystery dungeons, no sign of anybody else. Gabe knew he lost everything he saw the destruction of Breezetopia, the place he once called home. He remembered that day clearly. Just playing with his friend petal just outside the outskirts of the city.

He explored a bit to far and fell of the edge of the cliff hanging from the city. He should have not survived that fall and sometimes he regrets he didn't. He saw what happened to them all of those he knew regardless on his opinions of them. That wretched light ball in the distance it consumed everyone in the town. He saw those that scared him run in terror trying to escape an already destined fate. He saw his family and friends terrified not knowing where he was, scared that he already got consumed.

"I'm alright, I'm right here please don't leave me like this."

His voice never reached her, his tears were never seen. He was ready to accept the fate he was dealt. Though fate had other plans for him, he was saved by a mysterious figure he couldn't see them clearly all he saw was blurs of red and white. Why couldn't it have been someone else who was the lone survivor, why did he have to have a fate worth than death, to all that he loved disappear in front of him where he could do nothing about.

After another hour of walking he found a cave, a good place to rest for tonight. As he approached the cave he was suddenly grabbed by a mysterious pokemon and dragged in the cave. The mysterious pokemon started to yap.

"Heyya captn' I found an new survivor dey looks starved an'a weak epecially dirty forst a Minccino."

"Mudlow you are excused, and welcome Minccino welcome to the survivors base, the last resort rescue base for all rescue teams that were out on missions when their towns got consumed."

day 46…,

Its been a while since my brother was consumed. I fear that what once I thought was a silly legend turns out to be a terrifying truth. I've only been able to find one survivor and have been watching from a distance making sure that they are safe on their travels.. Though on a personal note.

I sometimes wonder is it worth trying to cling on to the hope that a hero from another world will come and protect ours. But we all know that's the stuff of legend, tales passed on from generation to generation. Though that could be said about my species too lol. Cause Imagine being a species that there is only one every 1000 years which can live a millennia and being so in the know that they are only 16.

There's just something that bothers me, what if my brother doesn't come back. What if the sacrifice to save me sealed his fate forever trapped. I try to be positive pretend I don't care because at the end of the day the more fake I am the less I should care about my brother. He was not just annoying overprotective pest, he was the thing that kept me flying. Every day I try to pretend he wasn't there, that I'm being delusional, that nothing really happened.

I can always cope, I can always smile, cause at the end of the day I'm fine, it doesn't hurt, just keep pretending your someone else, someone who isn't weak, someone who isn't shy, someone who doesn't care, someone who stays oblivious, someone who isn't me.

-eos

"Malvio I have an order. Or fears conquer me."

"Mademoiselle, what would you have me do. Hopefully something with a little of ze choas."

"My plAn to get revEnge on this Tiny empty world, Tear it bit by biT, crumble eVery last CHIKORITA that is in it. I just need a little, little wOrry not my apprentice. scary scary fate could arise, revenge revenge against NIAVE idiots. Burn in inferno fool who took everything. Sanity no more HUMAN may come and bury me again in PAIN PAIN. World must go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go…"

"Miss Telilah, can you be a bit precise, its hard to understand you when you have fits like zis, we both want zis cruel world to be gone and only you mademoiselle, know how to do that."

"HUMAN must NOT meet with destined companion throw HUMAN off cliff."

"Miss do you always have to be zis inefficient couldn't we just absorb them in ze doomsday device."

"NO they must feel pain, feel what their very existence took away from me, torture them seconds minutes seconds time time time. LOST all JAIL JAIL CENTURIES."

"How do we know where ze human will be, mademoiselle."

"Grotto near Breezetopia, wait ambush, wait ambush! lie, lie trick, trick take to ghostflame peak."

"Anything for you, Mademoiselle."

The moon shined over the cliffside perfectly stars waltzing across the night, the only thing in the world that came for her and helped her. She knew that no one would miss her, she was the disabled kid the one that couldn't walk. The ones whose only purpose was to be the joke in the room, the person to be picked on with no repercussion. No one tried to be kind to her they saw no advantage in doing so. Her parents were absent always partying and leaving her alone.

She looked up at the sky again remembering that sky that gave her remorse every day. Darkness was her only friend it hid her from the bullies, it hid her from her loneliness. Her dreams were filled with her being up there with the stars talking to them like they were always friends talking about worlds that they've seen. Drawing her dreams in her notebook the worlds she wished she could be. Dreams that she knew could never be achieved.

She started to fall asleep slowly drifting in to a world not of her own but of something she may have came up with why escaping the harsh reality of her life.

Cassey soon woke up in a grotto surrounded by trees with a lake up on a hill, she tried to move her wheelchair. Nothing Happened. She looked down and saw that she had legs. Fennekin legs. She started dashing knowing that she had legs, she was finally not useless.

Out of the corner a Nicket walked out. "Hello Miss?……. Oh it doesn't matter I lost my monocle on Ghostflame Peak. Could you help me retrieve it?"

Cassey quickly responded "Yes I can I have legs now!"

Malvio sighed "You are ze weirdest mon I've met."

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  • clasingla
    clasingla Member Posts: 4,099 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    since it’s been a while since I last written some tips would be appreciated

    (Grammar, structure, or story wise)

  • UnovanZorua
    UnovanZorua Member Posts: 2,658 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    It's good, but the diary section was hard to understand.

  • Eremas
    Eremas Member Posts: 1,964 ✭✭✭✭
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    I have to admit that I feel I don't know enough about mystery dungeon now.