Mystery Dungeon Story Part 9

clasingla

https://community.pokemon.com/en-us/discussion/comment/50063#Comment_50063

sorry if you read chapter 7 it will make since if I introduce the loyal three that would introduce a big plothole in the story

PokemiiAC

https://community.pokemon.com/en-us/discussion/comment/50076#Comment_50076

yeah, but what if he tries again

clasingla

next chapter waiting for approval

Eremas

You write like you have read some Pokemon stories before. I would like to see you improve.

Eremas

“I’m pretty sure the trail leads this way Comfey.” Bellosom said.

“Wait a second I think I see them! great work Bellosom.” A voice said that was small and calming.

made a small change to this part and before this part there should be space for a few rows because we are making a jump from team hopefinders to comfey.