Forums Community Story... Literally!
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I love that!
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I'm gonna give an example of all three
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I ran as fast as I could, making a sharp left to lose him. However, this took me to a dead end, trapping me. As I'm panicking, a whistle cuts through the air, paired with soft, slow footsteps. The sound sends chills through my whole body, my unease becoming worse when the walking stops. Shakily, I turn to see Hades standing a few feet away from me, a sinister smirk arrogantly placed on his face.
2: (Hades is my character, so example in his p.o.v)
I chase after Willow as she dashes through my warehouse. I'm running as fast as I can, but she's got more speed, staying out of my reach. However, she turns a corner that I know is a dead end. I start to slow down and begin to whistle a soft tune as I stroll around the corner. I'm in no rush, knowing that she just ran into her demise. I come to a stop a few feet from her, a small but wicked smile spreading across my face as she shakily turns to face me.
3:
Willow's P.O.VI ran as fast as I could, making a sharp left to lose him. However, this took me to a dead end, trapping me.
Hades P.O.VI whistle a soft tune as I stroll around the corner. I'm in no rush, knowing that she just ran into a dead end. I come to a stop a few feet from her, a small but wicked smile spreading across my face as she shakily turns to face me.
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I like that first one in the listing
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How old is yours?
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Alright, Willow only P.O.V
Now, technically if you were writing that 1 and 2 would be the same, since 2 is the P.O.V of the writer's character
But if CrayZander was writing that 1 and 2 would never happen because they only write in Sheriff Maxwell's P.O.V
For me 1 could never happen since that's not Hades P.O.V
Option 3 allows us access to all characters to write as
2 limits us to who we made
1 limits us to Willow
I'm down for whatever, I just want to make sure I explained it properly
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Okay, Willow will be 14.
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Oooh..
Waiiiiit....
That makes sense now.
X out 1, so either 2 or 3.
Maybe 3 than1