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Re: Mystery dungeon Story part 12
Its good. There's enough description where you don't need a lot of action. I feel I don't have enough actual experience in writing to tell you what you've done wrong.1 -
Re: Mystery dungeon Story part 12
I do wish we did get the whole story of the dad.1 -
Re: mystery dungeon part 11 (Draft 3) true cannon version
So I reread this chapter because I got up early today and you had a moment of suspense pretty early on but I feel you didn't capitalize on it. And you need more structure to your writing. I like…1 -
Re: How can we increase activeness on the forum
Maybe what we need to increase activeness is just more time. Maybe we as a people need to evolve. Social media and forums are pretty new. I just hope we can learn from things happening online.1 -
Re: How can we increase activeness on the forum
Its just a characteristic of the internet that some people don't see these(online) relationships as anything but chit chat or purely for entertainment. It's also the case that people will g…2
