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Re: Mystery Dungeon Story Part 9
“I’m pretty sure the trail leads this way Comfey.” Bellosom said. “Wait a second I think I see them! great work Bellosom.” A voice said that was small and calming. made a small change to this part an…1 -
Re: Mystery Dugeon Story Part 7
A minor change would be, when introducing Munkidori, not follow the same formula as the other two of the lousy three. Though it isn't the most unique character.1 -
Re: pokemon mystery dungeon story part 3
staying cliffhangering is great! Bold choice.1 -
Re: Mystery dungeon story part 1 rewrite
cool idea is that hisuian zorua is very old and chose to never evolve1 -
Re: Pokémon mystery dungeon adventure part 2
i like the illusion idea and the cliffhanger at the end.1
